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Layers of the City

Twenty-six stories high, I look down to illuminated veins, blinking red and then white; The city is alive, breathing through concrete lungs. Up to the ninth floor. Two glass bottles on the ledge sit empty; The painted walls hold my secrets. On the fifth flat. People flowing in and out, Yet a place for rest. Down to two. Long halls lined with lockers, Laughter, lectures, and languages. The city. Packed gridlocked lanes with blaring horns. The heart of the city, both human and machine, beats constantly.

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Date: 5/7/2016 10:53:00 AM
julianna, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 5/7/2016 2:10:00 AM
Julianna, Nice and wonderful first entry. Welcome to poetry soup. Hope you will enjoy our community. Wish you a fruitful journey ahead.....//:) hugs
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Date: 5/6/2016 1:55:00 AM
Julianna, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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