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Lay Down My Heart-Or

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Lay down my heart on meadows mossy green, Rest my eyes upon valleys evermore… Display thy lips, my quintessential Queen, Nest my love till the never-ending shore… Sauté my soul in a carnal cuisine, Ingest my nectars in your inner core… Lands of wine and honey we will partake, Hands of destiny desire to awake.
May.30.2019 Rima Ottava Poetry Sponsored by: Charles Messina Placed 1'st...Thank You

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Date: 7/1/2019 12:49:00 PM
Congrats on you win, WW, I enjoyed this wonderful romantic poem. John
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Date: 7/1/2019 7:37:00 AM
A great romantic piece, WW. Every line is a poem in itself...love this. Sending love and congratulations on your 1st place win. ~Charlie
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Date: 6/3/2019 7:26:00 PM
Lovely poetic write, WW!
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Date: 6/2/2019 1:36:00 PM
^WW^ you have just winged yourself into a sure win - Epic! Hugs, Jennifer.
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Date: 6/2/2019 7:45:00 AM
Nicely done..
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Date: 5/31/2019 8:16:00 AM
Beautifully written WW :)
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Date: 5/31/2019 1:52:00 AM
WW, Your words never disappoint. Your poetry, divination, rhymed. The message, simply sublime. -Richard
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