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Laughter

Lift me up, twirl me round
Leap softly off this page
Lighten souls from their grey
Linger with excitement
Leaving smiles in your wake
Look at me, see me true
Laugh and I will laugh too



Pleiades L - Poetry Contest
4/14/2017

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Mark Martin

Date: 4/27/2017 3:19:00 PM

Uplifting verse Tim! Congratulations! :-)

Eve Roper

Date: 4/22/2017 7:26:00 PM

Nicely written , Tim, congratulations on your win. ~*

Kendall Gothberg

Date: 4/21/2017 2:22:00 PM

That definitely made me feel happy. I really like poems that actually make me feel something.Thanks.

Joanna Daniel

Date: 4/20/2017 11:43:00 AM

Inspiring and uplifting poem, Tim, love that second line:) congratulations:)

Kim Merryman

Date: 4/18/2017 9:57:00 PM

Tim, your poem was uplifting and had great flow. Beautifully written! Congrats on your 1st place win! Blessings, Kim

John Michaels

Date: 4/18/2017 7:20:00 PM

Nice write, Tim. Congrats on your high-placed win! Regards, John.

Charlie Smith

Date: 4/18/2017 3:55:00 PM

Congratulations Tim...

Sara Chansarkar

Date: 4/18/2017 3:19:00 PM

Excellent verse Tim!

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 4/18/2017 5:29:00 AM

A lovely and happy poem! Congrats, Tim!

Roy Pett

Date: 4/18/2017 5:23:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved win Tim, great theme. :))

Joseph May

Date: 4/18/2017 3:58:00 AM

Congrats on your win Tim

Jean Murray

Date: 4/18/2017 2:38:00 AM

Well deserved number one placement Tim. Bet you're laughing now.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/18/2017 1:50:00 AM

- Congratulations on your "Pleiades L" poems, Tim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Agnes Krampe

Date: 4/17/2017 9:31:00 PM

Congrats on your win, Tim. Lovely!

Lisa Ricci

Date: 4/17/2017 11:17:00 AM

Good Afternoon Tim. Have a seat and let me ramble for a moment. First laughter is always right and timely. There is never enough of it. However I also see beauty within your words especially within the words of your first and ending lines. Read back your words and you will see. I also found the execution of the format well done for your thoughts flowed and were never forced. Well done in its entirety. Good luck with the contest.