Laughter

Sitting here I view A baby picture No_there's none of me Just a few of you I wonder if_what You had a smile Laughter in eyes Gerber Baby_you Even the hair You sit up Four months old Gerber Baby Laughter Lights up Eyes I Wonder Did I Look like that Then I know I did not I see your eyes Wider they're set Smaller the nose Your ears attached Yes, I see your dad I see his features I see your grandma My Gerber Baby Laughter in your eyes Great contest by Poet Destroyer A Contest: Gerber Baby(poem contest) Written this Monday January 21, 2013

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Robin Davis

Date: 6/24/2014 8:38:00 AM

Sara This is so sweet and charming with a hint of sadness thrown in. Thank you for the great comment on my I Did It My Way poem.

Debbie Duncan

Date: 2/25/2013 11:56:00 PM

love this write ;} I have no baby pictures of me either. One day I think it matters, other days I think "who cares" it's nice to read from you today. Have a great day Sara ;} thank you for reading Wasn't Me ;}

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 2/3/2013 12:42:00 PM

Congratulations on your winning spot Sara luv xx

Bukang Liwayway

Date: 2/3/2013 8:40:00 AM

like it friend Sara, Congratulations on your win on PD's Gerber Baby contest. this is awesome. Hugs from me to you :) Maria

Debra Squyres

Date: 2/2/2013 9:05:00 AM

Love this, Sara !! Very descriptive !! Congrats on your win !!

Joseph May

Date: 2/1/2013 8:09:00 PM

congrats on your win Sara

Mehnaz Veetil

Date: 2/1/2013 7:34:00 PM

wonderful write ,congrats...

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/1/2013 7:21:00 PM

SaraCongratulations on a job well done. Enjoyed the cute and beautiful baby poems. I hope you do not mind that I embraced the amusement of this contest with my 13 year old son. Always and forever ~ LINDA

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 1/21/2013 4:14:00 PM

Great poem for the contest. I hope it wins. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla

Russell Sivey

Date: 1/21/2013 4:11:00 PM

This is a tender write my friend, I really enjoyed reading this delightful poem this evening! You have painted a great Gerber Baby for us, sorry you don't have baby pictures of yourself, those pictures during that time of life are highly overrated...except to our mothers of course!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/21/2013 3:07:00 PM

Sara, thank you for the support...xox~LINDA

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 1/21/2013 9:18:00 AM

Yes Su's Valentine Contest HUGS

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 1/21/2013 8:59:00 AM

So good Sara, the emotion of tenderness is very clear! Picture really do help with our memories I can see why some cultures feel they hold part of your soul! Light & Love

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/21/2013 8:07:00 AM

Everyone_I was adopted and when this contest opened, I realized that there are no baby pictures of me..The youngest age of me was two years old..Sara