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'laughter'

laughter produce wrinkles what a fable, give me wrinkles any day to dispel sadness

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Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/13/2011 4:37:00 AM

Needed a little laughter and a great poem to begin my reading day Wilma.. u always provide luv.. smiling now..

Kash Poet

Date: 4/14/2011 11:59:00 AM

The things I do repeatedly repeats in my poetry Wilma.LOL:)

James Foulk

Date: 3/31/2011 8:47:00 AM

oh so true, very good write.

Harry Horsman

Date: 3/30/2011 6:16:00 AM

yes how true this is Wilma, yet put this way in your Cinquain, drives the message home. love this. Harry

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/29/2011 11:27:00 PM

A cinquain after my own heart, Wilma. How are you doing in your neck of the woods today?

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 3/29/2011 5:42:00 PM

very twisted but pleasant thought with nice humor conveying a serious thought, Wilma

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 3/29/2011 2:28:00 PM

Hello my dear Wilma/partner in crime....This a great one to remember and going into my favs.. If choices like that could be made. Rich and alone or poor and loved? makes us think.. we need to colab again.. hope your asleep or being bad like Niko and still awake..lol luv Michael

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 3/29/2011 1:06:00 PM

haha yup I am still awake-- crazy huh? well I slept quite a lot today -- haha. and ok now you got me even curiouser what the writing in the sky said?? geez. ok ok I can just imagine what it says and not like it ;) -- it's ok really if you decide not to trust me with it-- Really. as in Really really truly!!

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 3/29/2011 1:06:00 PM

Seriously.

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 3/29/2011 1:06:00 PM

haha don't mind me, I am crazy 4 am in the morning

James Fraser

Date: 3/29/2011 12:47:00 PM

Wrinkles I can live with, sadness no no. Koolio Cinquain Wilma....:)

George Aul

Date: 3/29/2011 12:22:00 PM

Aren't they "laughter lines," anyway....George

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/29/2011 11:50:00 AM

"Laugh" lines are welcome, Wilma. It's the wrinkles that come from sadness that make us look old. Awesome poem! Let's keep sharing wrinkles born of laughter. Best wishes in the contest, dear. Love, Carolyn

Kash Poet

Date: 3/29/2011 11:39:00 AM

Brilliant write Wilma!Enjoyed--kashinath

Caryl Muzzey

Date: 3/29/2011 10:58:00 AM

A wonderful write! I'll take some laughter too! Good luck in the contest with this winner. Caryl

Nette Onclaud

Date: 3/29/2011 10:15:00 AM

everyone's got wrinkles, wilma.. i'd rather have the laughter anytime! awesome piece that makes smiles radiate.. winning wishes if for a contest! :) huggs, nette

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/29/2011 10:07:00 AM

I enjoyed reading your creative poetry today as always Wilma. Have a wonderful day and may you find even more inspiration to write as the day goes by. Love, Carol

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 3/29/2011 9:39:00 AM

ok give me wrinkles any day, missy ;) (ok but not too much wrinkles, heeehee kidding!) & go spill now-- what was written in the sky??? this curious missy wants to know?? hugs :)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/29/2011 8:50:00 AM

Beautiful words Wilma and great advice to all who read. .. laughter is the key to success and positiveness in one's own life luv.. super cool write my friend..

Poet Tacito

Date: 3/29/2011 6:01:00 AM

AMEN!!!! So very true! Great job, Wilma!

Joe Maverick

Date: 3/29/2011 5:13:00 AM

i'm with you on this one Wilma! oh, and thank you for the comment! on mine.