Laughing Lilies

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lively bruises bring vibrant hues, laughing layers of lilies in bloom tragic tangerine lofty blues, violet, pink silence tragedy petals pour out promise, penetrating lights erasing every sad voice, even the darkest nights blazing glories praying to the One who made them so alive, so satisfying, unaware of who they’d become A Monoku, Haiku and 4 lines of Rhyme - Same Theme Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Tania Kitchin June 9, 2023

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/13/2023 2:25:00 AM

- Congratulations Gina ... on your lovely poem in the contest, by Tania Kitchin - hugs

Tania Kitchin

Date: 6/12/2023 3:46:00 PM

Gina, a delightful set of poems, congratulations on your winning placement!

Bill Baker

Date: 6/9/2023 4:13:00 PM

Magnificent imagery and use of colors, Gina. A fine entry for the contest. Well-written to the requested forms. Good luck! Bill

Deb M

Date: 6/9/2023 5:09:00 AM

Absolutely gorgeous “alive” poem Regina! Debx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/9/2023 2:00:00 AM

- A beautiful poem ... love lilies ... waiting for them to bloom in my garden - Good luck in the contest ... a winning poem for sure, Gina :) - hugs