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Laughing at the Door I walked out the front door, never meaning to interrupt. I was feeding the old bread, to the morning birds. I do that every night before, I go to bed. It is not new. Near the side of the house, there in the dark, small voices, sharing an interment moment. One that they will keep, for the rest of their lives. I am quiet, I hurry. I am unnoticed. That is okay. I do not want to be, an intruder. I like the way he makes her laugh. Perhaps he may be the one? If not, there is always time, to consider options… in the garden of tomorrow. I have potatoes and carrots yet to put in.

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Date: 12/7/2019 11:57:00 PM
##I like the way he makes her laugh..## I like the way you made me laugh when imagining you putting potatoes and carrots.. lol.. Sweet poem..
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Ann Foster
Date: 12/8/2019 2:10:00 AM
hehe... hugs. Ann
Date: 12/6/2019 9:03:00 PM
Ah, this is poignant and pretty.
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Ann Foster
Date: 12/6/2019 10:06:00 PM
ty friend... God Bless your night. Ann

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