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Laughing At the Door

Laughing at the Door

I walked out the front door, 
never meaning to interrupt. 
I was feeding the old bread, 
to the morning birds. 
I do that every night before, 
I go to bed. 
It is not new. 

Near the side of the house, 
there in the dark, 
small voices, 
sharing an interment moment. 
One that they will keep, 
for the rest of their lives. 

I am quiet, 
I hurry. 
I am unnoticed.
That is okay. 
I do not want to be, 
an intruder. 

I like the way he makes her laugh. 
Perhaps he may be the one?
If not, there is always time, 
to consider options…
in the garden of 
tomorrow. 

I have potatoes and carrots
yet to put in.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Somadas Avatar
December 7, 2019 at 11:57 PM
##I like the way he makes her laugh..## I like the way you made me laugh when imagining you putting potatoes and carrots.. lol.. Sweet poem..
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December 8, 2019 at 2:10 AM
hehe... hugs. Ann
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December 6, 2019 at 9:03 PM
Ah, this is poignant and pretty.
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December 6, 2019 at 10:06 PM
ty friend... God Bless your night. Ann
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