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latter day angel

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Lessons were learnt before your d.o.b Like you right now, young and naive you see My right man was perfection Though not there at conception Listen, don't mimic, your learning from me

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David Kavanagh

Date: 8/22/2024 2:54:00 AM

Bitingly funny and Clever Dilly, all the hallmarks of a great Limerick, a good lesson here for all of us, irony personified, brilliant one for the contest, cheers David

Di11y Da11y
Date: 8/22/2024 6:05:00 AM

I'll look out in interest - I'm surprised there are so many takes on this one :)

David Kavanagh
Date: 8/22/2024 3:15:00 AM

I have got a few ideas, but not this one, it’s all yours, mine are a little (much) darker, would certainly have to tone them down a bit before posting, lol!

Di11y Da11y
Date: 8/22/2024 3:01:00 AM

Well I feel like I nicked the idea from you in a roundabout way - saw you mention you had a few ideas in your comment on Lin's and nabbed this idea from the ether. Not sure I'd have thought of anything otherwise :) thank you for your encouragement :)