Late October

Though tenuous the winds impinge 
on late October's brittle fringe,
bereft of August's saffron glow
when brilliant sky did ardent flow
formidable in cyan tinge,

immutable will frost astringe
hot tangerine of summer singe;
no haven for the zeal to go.

Demurely comes first winter's twinge
as last of maple leaves unhinge.
Soon falcons after doves will go
'cross interludes of vestal snow,
while eaves sketch icicles' syringe.



10/23/17
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Pandit Avatar
November 4, 2017 at 9:32 AM
Congrats Dale--well deserved top win!
Cozart Avatar
November 4, 2017 at 9:38 AM
Thanks, Vijay!
Delaney Avatar
November 4, 2017 at 7:15 AM
Congratulations,Dale: A lovely flowing tribute to the changing seasons. Best, SuZ
Cozart Avatar
November 4, 2017 at 8:00 AM
Thanks, Suzanne!
Sinha-Roy Avatar
November 4, 2017 at 3:34 AM
Congratulations on your great win, Dale.
Cozart Avatar
November 4, 2017 at 8:00 AM
Thanks so much!
Hamilton Avatar
November 3, 2017 at 8:40 PM
This is very very good Dale congrats on a great shared 2nd place win!
Cozart Avatar
November 4, 2017 at 8:00 AM
Thanks, John!
Adams Avatar
October 25, 2017 at 10:05 AM
The Rondeau is one of my favorite forms in poetry. Good one.
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October 24, 2017 at 11:58 AM
Winter is my second best time or it used to be. This year will be a test to see if I can make it through. Your poem is full of colour and beauty but winter is the truth unvarnished especially November. It is skeletal, You have written a beautiful poem and it goes into my treasure box.
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October 24, 2017 at 12:10 PM
Thanks so much, Patricia!
Wanter Avatar
October 23, 2017 at 5:54 PM
Pray for April is right, Dale. I don't get along with Winter.
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October 23, 2017 at 6:13 PM
Thanks for stopping by!
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