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Late October

Though tenuous the winds impinge on late October's brittle fringe, bereft of August's saffron glow when brilliant sky did ardent flow formidable in cyan tinge, immutable will frost astringe hot tangerine of summer singe; no haven for the zeal to go. Demurely comes first winter's twinge as last of maple leaves unhinge. Soon falcons after doves will go 'cross interludes of vestal snow, while eaves sketch icicles' syringe. 10/23/17

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Date: 11/4/2017 9:32:00 AM
Congrats Dale--well deserved top win!
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 11/4/2017 9:38:00 AM
Thanks, Vijay!
Date: 11/4/2017 7:15:00 AM
Congratulations,Dale: A lovely flowing tribute to the changing seasons. Best, SuZ
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 11/4/2017 8:00:00 AM
Thanks, Suzanne!
Date: 11/4/2017 3:34:00 AM
Congratulations on your great win, Dale.
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 11/4/2017 8:00:00 AM
Thanks so much!
Date: 11/3/2017 8:40:00 PM
This is very very good Dale congrats on a great shared 2nd place win!
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 11/4/2017 8:00:00 AM
Thanks, John!
Date: 10/25/2017 10:05:00 AM
The Rondeau is one of my favorite forms in poetry. Good one.
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Date: 10/24/2017 11:58:00 AM
Winter is my second best time or it used to be. This year will be a test to see if I can make it through. Your poem is full of colour and beauty but winter is the truth unvarnished especially November. It is skeletal, You have written a beautiful poem and it goes into my treasure box.
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 10/24/2017 12:10:00 PM
Thanks so much, Patricia!
Date: 10/23/2017 5:54:00 PM
Pray for April is right, Dale. I don't get along with Winter.
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 10/23/2017 6:13:00 PM
Thanks for stopping by!

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