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there’s something so endearing about a late fall sun so mellow so sultry a warm toasty glow that lingers and penetrates your skin reaching through to the bone your body craving it moments so rare you want to treasure and stretch out knowing how few and precious those last rays really are before the clouds and snow winter will be long and the cold disheartening so soak up the energy of that october sun let it kiss your cheeks slowly utter its last goodbyes Published in my 24-page photo/anthology ~BYGONE DAYS OF SUMMER~ 2020 AP: Honorable Mention 2022 Submitted on June 14, 2020 for contest BRIAN'S SELECT H sponsored by BRIAN STRAND - RANKED 1ST Posted on September 20, 2019

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Date: 6/16/2020 10:35:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A wonderful write. I love fall. I cannot wait for it to once again come for a visit. I would love more fall and less summer heat. Enjoy your win an day.......
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Date: 6/15/2020 3:16:00 PM
Wonderful Line! October is my favorite month of the year. Congratulations on your outstanding First place win! xxoo
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Date: 6/16/2020 12:01:00 AM
Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Connie.
Date: 9/20/2019 3:37:00 PM
Those last two lines made this one go to my FAV list.
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Date: 9/20/2019 7:32:00 PM
Thanks for your most appreciated visit and compliment, Caren.
Date: 9/20/2019 9:22:00 AM
i couldn't agree more...temps were 43 here this morning when i awoke, down to 41 by time i went to work.... the afternoons are summerlike but it's fading out fast.... good one! :) hugs
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Date: 9/20/2019 12:07:00 PM
Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Sandra.

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