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there’s something so endearing
about a late fall sun
so mellow so sultry
a warm toasty glow that lingers
and penetrates your skin
reaching through to the bone
your body craving it
moments so rare
you want to treasure
and stretch out 
knowing how few and precious
those last rays really are
before the clouds and snow
winter will be long
and the cold disheartening
so soak up the energy
of that october sun
let it kiss your cheeks
slowly utter its last goodbyes



Published in my 24-page photo/anthology ~BYGONE DAYS OF SUMMER~ 2020

AP: 2nd place 2025, Honorable Mention 2022

Submitted on June 14, 2020 for contest BRIAN'S SELECT H sponsored by BRIAN STRAND  -  RANKED 1ST

Posted on September 20, 2019

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 6/16/2020 10:35:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A wonderful write. I love fall. I cannot wait for it to once again come for a visit. I would love more fall and less summer heat. Enjoy your win an day.......
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Date: 6/15/2020 3:16:00 PM
Wonderful Line! October is my favorite month of the year. Congratulations on your outstanding First place win! xxoo
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Date: 6/16/2020 12:01:00 AM
Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Connie.
Date: 9/20/2019 3:37:00 PM
Those last two lines made this one go to my FAV list.
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Date: 9/20/2019 7:32:00 PM
Thanks for your most appreciated visit and compliment, Caren.
Date: 9/20/2019 9:22:00 AM
i couldn't agree more...temps were 43 here this morning when i awoke, down to 41 by time i went to work.... the afternoons are summerlike but it's fading out fast.... good one! :) hugs
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Date: 9/20/2019 12:07:00 PM
Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Sandra.

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