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Last Twilight's Fragrance

Waiting for the last Sunset a calendar reminds of the days, the days those are left in life a life that longs now more Sun rays. A jasmine tree just outside outside the window facing west, fills each evening with fragrance a robin greets from its nest. Eagerly waiting for each Sunset though it reminds leftover days, last twilight in the life's sky do you know its fragrance? Looking back to life's ways kneeling down to bleeding heart, baring it to the lonely soul begging pardon for trodden path. There will be robin's greeting call even after the last Sunset, twilight's fragrance will fill the room find the soul in eternal rest.
9th May 2011 =====================

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 6/30/2015 6:34:00 PM
Kash, Congratulations on your old favorite poem. Always ~LINDA~
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Date: 6/28/2015 8:54:00 AM
This feels like a life well lived so therefore the sadness is tempered by an eternal beauty. Congratulations on a fine win Kash.
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Date: 6/28/2015 12:36:00 AM
Kash, Congrats on your win......Love SKAT
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Date: 6/27/2015 5:34:00 PM
Kash, congrats on your 1st place win with this beautiful poem! Love, Kim
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Date: 6/27/2015 3:14:00 AM
this sweetly scented poem thrills Kash Congrats on 1st place hugs
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Date: 3/16/2013 8:50:00 AM
It was good to read this one because the poems we see quickly leave our minds and in reviewing this one, it felt brand new for me. Beautiful one. how are you doing lately, Kash?
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Date: 7/18/2012 6:00:00 PM
Sad but sweet Kash! Congrad's on winning through round one. Light & Love
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Date: 7/18/2012 8:35:00 AM
Congratulations on your poem making it through round one of the PoetrySoup International Poetry Contest. I wish you the best in the finals Kash. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/28/2011 5:45:00 PM
Lily Of The Valley...Great and creative work..Enjoyed reading this eve..Congrats..Sara
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Date: 5/27/2011 7:58:00 AM
congratulations on your win in the contest with this soothing, restful piece which captures the essence of twilight...
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Date: 5/26/2011 6:52:00 PM
Kashinath, a pleasure to see your poem's recognition. Agape, Moses
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Date: 5/26/2011 3:50:00 AM
Many congrats Kashinath on HM win in HG's contest with this excellent entry. Luv & Best wishes - Hitendra Mehta
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Date: 5/25/2011 6:37:00 PM
Congrats Kash on your HM in HG's contest with this vivid and vibrant entry my friend.. enjoy your honor with luv..
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Date: 5/25/2011 3:31:00 PM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of HG, kashinath
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Date: 5/25/2011 10:57:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in HG's contest Kashinath. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/11/2011 5:51:00 AM
Gosh, I love this especially your last stanza.. All the best for HG's contest Kash :)
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Date: 5/10/2011 4:36:00 PM
thankxx Kash .. your words always inspire me as they are so romantic in nature and I luv writing luv poetry as u can tell haha.. appreciate your encouraging comments always my friend..
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Date: 5/10/2011 4:33:00 PM
Very expressive and descriptive work that reminds me of a great sunset..Enjoyed...Good luck in the contest with this sure winner..Thanks for gracing my work with your presence..Sara
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Date: 5/10/2011 2:20:00 PM
Hey, what's maja aa gaya!! haha. I hope you know that was all made up. Actually I am losing a little weight. haha. LUv, andrea
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Date: 5/10/2011 12:41:00 PM
how wow, kashi.... as brilliant as the sunset you so painted! impressed to the max! winning's best.:) huggs, nette
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Date: 5/10/2011 11:44:00 AM
beautiful write on sunset here, kashinath-- and I really like the thought o fputting a fragrance to sunset-- very nice way of thinking that... and thanks for passing by my poems here :) really appreciate that! :)
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Date: 5/10/2011 12:03:00 AM
really a good one..while reading i was able to visualize it...n thank you for your appreciation for my poem.
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Date: 5/9/2011 11:01:00 PM
A beautiful one, Kash, and you chose wisely with sunset!! This seemed to be like some kind of a form of poetryto me. Does it have a name other than just rhyme?
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Date: 5/9/2011 2:50:00 PM
This is really beautiful Kash, I love each word, each line, I imagine the Jasmine tree is sublime... and I have finished my poem, I would love your opinion, I think it is quite dreamy and divine, not to mention sublime ~~
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Date: 5/9/2011 1:46:00 PM
Amazing words on the sunset.. I also wrote about sunset.. the twilight time..most beautiful.. great expressions Kash and elegant visuals make this piece a winner already luv.. good luck in the contest ..
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