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Last Snow

last snow melting in march afternoon children fidgety posted on June 7, 2018

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Date: 6/8/2018 6:00:00 AM
Great haiku, something I struggle with. Faux
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Date: 6/8/2018 7:48:00 AM
I understand, Fauxcroft. I have joined Haiku Canada and have FAR from mastered it... but it's fun trying.
Date: 6/7/2018 10:19:00 PM
You're getting very talented with the haiku.. hugs Eve
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Date: 6/7/2018 11:24:00 PM
Thank you so much, Eve. Practice and more practice.
Date: 6/7/2018 2:40:00 PM
- A lot of snow in March ... I'm glad it's summer :) - A nice haiku - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 6/7/2018 11:25:00 PM
Thanks for your visit, Sunshine. Much appreciated.
Date: 6/7/2018 2:03:00 PM
You were more productive than I was this morning, Line. Nine lovely haiku before 10:00 a.m. :)
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Date: 6/7/2018 2:37:00 PM
LOL a little extra java this morning.
Date: 6/7/2018 12:05:00 PM
Your seasonal timing is perfect for Texas, well done Line...
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Date: 6/7/2018 2:38:00 PM
I bet. Thanks for your visit, Charlie.
Date: 6/7/2018 11:31:00 AM
Nice Haiku Line.
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Date: 6/7/2018 11:54:00 AM
Much appreciated, Samuel.
Date: 6/7/2018 10:00:00 AM
You have captured March exactly with this haiku, Line.
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Date: 6/7/2018 10:44:00 AM
Thanks, Caren. Much appreciated.
Date: 6/7/2018 9:37:00 AM
I could use a little snow right now. A 'brisk' haiku, Line.
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Date: 6/7/2018 9:40:00 AM
Thanks for your visit, Lin. LOL. The grass is always whiter on the other side.

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