Last Puff

One toke I choked Tried two turned blue No more for sure Last puff enough!

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Date: 7/12/2022 7:34:00 AM

Great Footles Gershon. More people should get the message. Stop or Drop! Bill

Date: 7/8/2022 9:56:00 PM

You will live longer for it, Gershon...

Date: 7/8/2022 9:56:00 AM

Ha! Nicely done, Gershon!

Gershon Wolf
Date: 7/9/2022 9:12:00 PM

Thanks, Ilene!

Date: 7/8/2022 8:55:00 AM

Good! Ah, and good footles, too. Funny!

Date: 7/8/2022 7:00:00 AM

Wonderful footles, and it would be great if those puffs could inspire more footles that are similar to this.

Date: 7/7/2022 10:34:00 PM

Great footles ! Don't turn blue again ! Enough is enough ! :)

Gershon Wolf
Date: 7/9/2022 9:08:00 PM

O.K. Next time I'll turn green. ~ Well-Read Man

Date: 7/7/2022 8:27:00 PM

Last puff, long before How many? Not keeping score…

Gershon Wolf
Date: 7/9/2022 9:11:00 PM

My last puff was in September, 1973. Think I'll ever get the monkey off my back?