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Last Night

You promised that we’d never part; I felt secure beside your beating heart. Your arms, so gentle, holding me, You whispered, ‘This is how it’s meant to be.’ I laughed, ‘I dreamed you’d run away.’ But then I woke, alone: another day…

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 10/14/2011 7:06:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry placing in Brian's "Upto Ten Lines" contest Jack. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/13/2011 1:39:00 PM
Super job...congrats on your win. I enjoyed, even though it is sad...BG
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Date: 10/13/2011 10:40:00 AM
Congrats Jack on another amazing win with super poetry my friend.. will get to your s.m. shortly.. this site was down so long yesterday I just got disgusted..oh..
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Date: 10/13/2011 10:36:00 AM
Sad, but well said Jack. Congratulations on your win
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Date: 10/13/2011 10:35:00 AM
Very nice jack!Congrats on your win.
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Date: 10/12/2011 5:20:00 PM
Great thoughts penned found in the winners' circle..Congrats..Sara
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Date: 10/10/2011 6:40:00 PM
ah dreams are quite fantastic..if only they spilled over into reality realm Jack.. nice lines of fervent wishing luv... enjoyed my friend..
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