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Last Memory

A fuchsia sunset,
a vacant room in the inn 
with a vista near the sea,
inhaling your sweet scent
that lingered and excited
as we hugged each other on the porch.
The calm sea flowed into the bay,
the fishermen coming in with their catch,
the red mullet, elegant to see,
tasteful to eat as the bar-b-q flared,
the fish sprinkled in herbed oil,
garnished with garlic,
and an aromatic salsa verde,
plus salad and its vinaigrette.

I remember your fragile face,
your tender mouth munching,
spitting the tiny small bones
the red mullet is renowned for.
Your satisfaction of the freshness of the catch,
your pleasure for the craggy crustaceans,
laid out like precious jewels
on a dewy bed of snow-white ice.
 
Alas I remember,
for it was our last luscious meal together.
Next day you went to war never to return.

29 April 2021
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George Avatar
August 17, 2022 at 6:13 AM
So beautiful a poem ! So touching too ! The last delicious meal together .... ! The setting is so romantic, with no hint of an eternal goodbye !
Alex Avatar
May 5, 2021 at 2:26 AM
Beautiful Poem!
Buehler Avatar
May 1, 2021 at 12:45 PM
A last meal together that is beautifully described very clearly in its haunting detail. A sad but excellently wrought creation. Evelyn
Roper Avatar
April 30, 2021 at 3:02 PM
Great imagery, Victor, enjoyed reading. Hugs
Edmonds  Avatar
April 30, 2021 at 2:00 AM
Picture perfect in the readers mind Victor, a beautiful write with a unexpected tragic ending... Belle
Ball Avatar
April 29, 2021 at 8:39 PM
WoW Victor. Another poem so full of emotion and fond memories. Then there is the surprise ending. Well done my friend,. God Bless, JB
Poet Avatar
April 29, 2021 at 5:40 PM
Superb verses, full of imagery and imaginative features, the red mullet is my favorite specialty the Mediterranean mulet associated with the fuchsia sun. Have a wonderful evening dear friend
Kitchin Avatar
April 29, 2021 at 3:58 PM
Victor, A heart felt poem with a twist at the end, well done my friend! hugs
Rodrigues Avatar
April 29, 2021 at 3:17 PM
Excellent! The fuchsia sunset and red mullet, all the flavoring, scent and imagery impact your poem. A lovely moment that catches us in the throat at the sad ending.
Allison Avatar
April 29, 2021 at 2:43 PM
aww victor the ending was so sad I wasn't expecting it to be so tragic, beautifully penned as ever my friend, your imagery is so vivid whatever form you tackle:-) hugs Jan xx
Kendrick Avatar
April 29, 2021 at 9:32 AM
Sad one. My mother dated a man who would get on a train and come from other city a larger one to date her then he went off to war and she never saw him again. I would assume that he died over there fighting. You make the red mullet sound good but the mullet we have over here is very fishy. I don't even know if I could eat it today. LOL..Your visit to my page was encouraging. Sara
Buhagiar Avatar
April 29, 2021 at 11:06 AM
Alas the best red mullet is in the Mediterranean.
Seeker Avatar
April 29, 2021 at 8:12 AM
Brutal, as is life. Yet, we must trudge on. Great write, Victor!
Y. Avatar
April 29, 2021 at 7:09 AM
WoW! Victor, You took your reader on a poetic journey. On a journey filled with good memories and stunning imagery. Although the ending was sad, It was a good piece to read today. Have a great day, my friend - Alexis
Bayles Avatar
April 29, 2021 at 6:57 AM
Vivid memories.
Ricci Avatar
April 29, 2021 at 6:30 AM
Hello Victor - Always do you take us on an emotional and vivid journey placing us in the very scene that you describe looking on. Your entry is wonderful throughout. Thank you for sharing with us.
Pandit Avatar
April 29, 2021 at 5:33 AM
Once again your poetic prowess sets the scene in minute details that bring the scene alive for the reader. I see that last meal of joy together in your words--but then--the ending! Your writes never disappoint, Victor.
Daniel Avatar
April 29, 2021 at 2:35 AM
Wow! Victor, your eye to detail and the comparison you use are so unique and refreshing:) the ending is sad, but with your touch of surprising turns:)
Cunningham Avatar
April 29, 2021 at 2:16 AM
We all love happy endings but sadly life isnt always a fairytale. Tom
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