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Last Man Standing

In a world of hell, soldiers had songs they sung Through standing in blood from bullets demonic tongue As bombs explode, bullets whistle, its death they fight Men fight hand to hand, through the night A soldier alone lay huddled and frightened To his rifle's trigger his fingers tightened His body lay covered in smoke and mud With death around him, stained with blood No reason he finds for this unwanted plight The death of every soldier until sun's light A moment of clarity after facing death His, the only chest left with any breath The last man standing hard to accept Faces of soldiers whom he'll owe a debt A decision to face, comes to his head As a future of memories lay ahead A final stare at the mass of crumpled dead This pile of friends where lifeless lives go unsaid A crackling laughter from this vision he won't forget Lets out a scream, falls on the point of his bayonet 9/6/16 contest Poem Ending with a 'Chilling Twist

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Date: 9/12/2016 7:54:00 AM
Sad...Well done! Sunita
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Date: 9/11/2016 9:16:00 PM
big congrats on a very well deserved win.
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Date: 9/11/2016 6:45:00 PM
Very powerful with such an unexpected ending, Frederic. Congratulations on your placement among this short list of winners! Sandra
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Date: 9/11/2016 5:51:00 PM
Frederic, very chilling this is, fits so well with the theme, wonderful write...congratulations on your placement :)-luloo
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Date: 9/10/2016 9:07:00 AM
A great write Frederic. Truly chilling and disturbing.
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Date: 9/7/2016 8:22:00 PM
Wasn't expecting that, Frederic! Whoah! Great write. Good luck. Regards, Viv
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Date: 9/7/2016 8:49:00 AM
Good luck but you don't need it Frederic! I am having such a hard time coming up with an idea and yours is the best I've seen so far in this contest! well done dear man :)-luloo
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Date: 9/6/2016 10:24:00 PM
OH MY, now that was really chilling!!! I love the title and how it contrasts with your ending, Frederic. Great job and good luck in the contest.
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Date: 9/6/2016 12:44:00 PM
Survivor's remorse! Very sad write Frederic. Sadly, it happens.
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