Last Man Standing

In a world of hell, soldiers had songs they sung
Through standing in blood from bullets demonic tongue
As bombs explode, bullets whistle, its death they fight
Men fight hand to hand, through the night

A soldier alone lay huddled and frightened
To his rifle's trigger his fingers tightened
His body lay covered in smoke and mud
With death around him, stained with blood

No reason he finds for this unwanted plight
The death of every soldier until sun's light
A moment of clarity after facing death
His, the only chest left with any breath

The last man standing hard to accept
Faces of soldiers whom he'll owe a debt
A decision to face, comes to his head
As a future of memories lay ahead

A final stare at the mass of crumpled dead
This pile of friends where lifeless lives go unsaid
A crackling laughter from this vision he won't forget 
Lets out a scream, falls on the point of his bayonet

9/6/16
contest Poem Ending with a 'Chilling Twist
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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U.D Palawon  Avatar
September 12, 2016 at 7:54 AM
Sad...Well done! Sunita
Dietrich Avatar
September 11, 2016 at 9:16 PM
big congrats on a very well deserved win.
Haight Avatar
September 11, 2016 at 6:45 PM
Very powerful with such an unexpected ending, Frederic. Congratulations on your placement among this short list of winners! Sandra
Scars Avatar
September 11, 2016 at 5:51 PM
Frederic, very chilling this is, fits so well with the theme, wonderful write...congratulations on your placement :)-luloo
Inman Avatar
September 10, 2016 at 9:07 AM
A great write Frederic. Truly chilling and disturbing.
Wigley Avatar
September 7, 2016 at 8:22 PM
Wasn't expecting that, Frederic! Whoah! Great write. Good luck. Regards, Viv
Scars Avatar
September 7, 2016 at 8:49 AM
Good luck but you don't need it Frederic! I am having such a hard time coming up with an idea and yours is the best I've seen so far in this contest! well done dear man :)-luloo
Dietrich Avatar
September 6, 2016 at 10:24 PM
OH MY, now that was really chilling!!! I love the title and how it contrasts with your ending, Frederic. Great job and good luck in the contest.
Turner Avatar
September 6, 2016 at 12:44 PM
Survivor's remorse! Very sad write Frederic. Sadly, it happens.
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