Last Journey

last journey--- dead bodies draped in white waiting in a queue *Scene from a burning ghat (crematorium)

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/2/2012 12:21:00 AM

kach... Congratulations with your awesome win in Susan's waiting contest... what a WAIT..lol ;-) ~xox PD

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/1/2012 1:53:00 PM

Congratulations on your placement in Susan's "Wait" contest Kash. Love, Carol

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/31/2012 11:36:00 AM

((()))Congrats on your very expressive and emotive winning work..Sara

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/31/2012 9:02:00 AM

wow what a visual Kash.. super congrats on a brilliant write and win luv..

Olusegun Arowolo

Date: 7/31/2012 6:31:00 AM

Awesome piece,Kash...great write...Congratulations on your superb win..Kudos to your friend...

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 7/31/2012 1:19:00 AM

deep, congratulations Kash xx

Jonas L. Rozario

Date: 7/30/2012 11:58:00 PM

wow this is deep...many congrats Kash.

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 7/30/2012 5:22:00 PM

Excellent write, Kash! It gave me shivers...congrats on your win! Love and Blessings, Rhonda

Sabina Nicole

Date: 7/30/2012 4:06:00 PM

Great Job!!! Enjoyed your write<3 Bean

Sharon Ruebel

Date: 7/30/2012 2:43:00 PM

Wonderful haiku Kash, Congratulations on your win................ Lov, Shar

David Williams

Date: 7/30/2012 2:35:00 PM

Kash, congrats on your win, I loved this frist time, just excellent..David

Joyce Johnson

Date: 7/30/2012 2:03:00 PM

unbearably sad but a wonderful entry. congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce

Gwendolen Song

Date: 7/18/2012 11:15:00 AM

Such an odd day to read this one, Kash...My friend just passed a few hours ago and tomorrow will be his day "in queue." You make poetry so interesting to read...enjoy visiting your poetry regularly, friend...gwendolen

James Marshall Goff

Date: 7/13/2012 5:29:00 AM

I worked in a cemetery in my youth.....I remember the nice guy who ran the "under-ground" crematorium...repeated every sentence twice/repeated every sentence twice...asked me once if I wanted some ribs....no joke....thanks for comments! Kash...jimbo