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For Constance La France Quagmire, Quest, Quiscent words contest.

An Ode is a type of poem that focuses on a single object or condition that the writer believes is amazing and praiseworthy. This type of poem centers on a person, an idea, a place, a memory, or any other thing one wishes to praise.

Love is a silent emotion, invisible to open eyes. But, I saw the naked soul of her enigma - my universal truth. A pristine state of perfection. As her 'silence' whispered to my soul in a million ways - I felt her pangs As her spirit breathed my oxygen, my heart forgot about gravity, feeling immortal in every beat. Now a small flame kindles in her chocolate brown eyes - hotter than wildfire. I see beyond her invisible veil, hiding her divinity, wrapped under, her tanned bronze satin skin. Smoother than a bed of feathers - would to touch it, be a sin? Her fruitful lips of blissful nectar, are an eternal passage, covered in ethereal dew, awaiting my soul with promises for unseen paradisaical passion - a taste would leave one intoxicated. The mind pleads with time to be kind, for the heart to remain patient - for distance to not become an adversary. Because, nothing could define her elegance, in any form of artistry; a poet has no vocabulary, a musician without a beat to his melody, a painter without control in his masterstroke. Her aroma is a rare scent from petals, my hands could never fathom to blossom. Her love is like the sun rays of a new dawn, forever, ascending my heart with warmth. I am her cloudless sky, for her glory to shine, the ripples in her deep ocean - for her to bathe within me. In my quest to be within her embrace, I shall keep the vampires from her door, slay the demons who bring her darkness. Face Satan in his satanic seas. Be the whirlwind in her storm, releasing her from chains of uncertainty. Once, I gazed at the stars, wondering where you were. My musings writing about your arrival. You appeared to end all seeking, filling my hollowness with endearment - became the last drop of my ink.

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Date: 2/14/2024 7:50:00 PM
A truly sublime ode dear Silent One. I absolutely delighted in the climaxed emote at the end of each stanza. Warmest congratulations on your trophy win in Brian’s contest.
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Date: 2/14/2024 6:43:00 PM
Such vivid descriptions! CONGRATS on your top win, S.O. Janice
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Date: 2/14/2024 9:44:00 AM
Very impressive winning work. Way to go.Thanks for sharing your talent with us. Congratulations. Sara K
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Date: 2/14/2024 5:22:00 AM
Silent, excellent poem, beautiful and congratulations on your win in my contest, love the image too, blessings, Constance
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Date: 2/13/2024 1:22:00 PM
Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful write again. Enjoy your day with your win....................
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Date: 2/3/2024 10:31:00 AM
She seems so perfect! This gives me a feeling of having sex with the girl of my dreams--who happens to be my wife in my case. There is no one absolutely perfect, but we can overlook a lot when feeling kindness and taking time to temper our expectations. It's not easy to maintain the reality, but the longing is beautiful. Keeping the feeling you describe is not so easy.
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Date: 1/31/2024 8:48:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your "Quest" write/picture/great~great ending. Oh yes, "the last drop of my ink." Love your line, "Love is a silent emotion." It Is... Thanks for reading my Quest write. Have a wonderful day writing away.............
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Date: 1/31/2024 6:09:00 AM
A charming delight, my friend. Your descriptions enhance the glamor of this quest:--Because, nothing could define her elegance, in any form of artistry;--a musician without a beat to his melody, a painter without control in his masterstroke---So elegantly pleading for object of devotion!
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Date: 1/31/2024 4:08:00 AM
The richness, the power, the emotion snd passion are all superbly and evocatively expressed, a romantic poem which can only bring gladeness and content to a heart. Sterling poem unbelievably composed. hugs and blessings Jennifer
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Date: 1/31/2024 2:48:00 AM
To see yourself as the source of existence means you value the care of feeding into another, but most of all the result. The responsibility to love with all your might and strive for worthiness. A beautiful poem.
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Date: 1/31/2024 12:46:00 AM
Great write, breath taking even! I love these lines, "for unseen paradisaical passion - a taste would leave one intoxicated." They brought the woozy feeling right thru as if by spell. I love it! Thx for sharing. <3
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Date: 1/30/2024 11:29:00 PM
Hello Silent One, a beautiful poem,you have penned! Have a blessed day!
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Date: 1/30/2024 9:08:00 PM
I love Rumi as you know, and I have often told you S1 that Rumi is your Muse. The favoured one, how fortunate are you? I love every line of this magnificent poem of yours, a Winner in my humble opinion, however, good luck. One of your best and a fave for me...Hugs
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Date: 1/30/2024 8:02:00 PM
You are an Orpheus singing always for your Euridice ! As Orpheus's music, your musings too can move even stones and inanimate objects. I am sure you are possessed by love in real life. "I am her cloudless sky, for her glory to shine, the ripples in her deep ocean - for her to bathe within me." Your love is deep like the ocean and broad like the sky. You breathe passion and wallow in romance.... an ardent lover who moves hearts. Into my FAVE.
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Date: 1/30/2024 6:03:00 PM
Dear Silent One, Wow, I am utterly moved by the depth and beauty of your poem. Your words are an exquisite blend of longing, passion, and reverence that transcends the boundaries of mere language. The imagery is breathtaking, from the beloved’s flower garden swirling in hallucination to the intimate portrayal of her enigmatic soul. Oh, Your willingness to face demons and storms for her sake speaks volumes about the depth of your devotion and the strength of your love. A FAV - Daniel
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Date: 1/30/2024 4:12:00 PM
I was moved by your prelude, "Silent One," from Rumi. This amazing effort inspires awe and admiration. This type of love is sinless, friend. Instead, it promotes harmony with the divine and contentment. That's one of the greatest submissions in the competition, and I like it. I instinctively know it will win the competition and make others romantic. Enjoying such exquisite poems is pure joy. Your portrayal of this person is captivating, and your writing is easy to follow.
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Date: 1/30/2024 4:02:00 PM
"Love is a silent emotion, invisible to open eyes. But, I saw the naked soul of her enigma", Powerful and beautiful write Silent
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Date: 1/30/2024 3:59:00 PM
Love the Rumi quote as an appetizer, Silent one. Rumi himself would love this poem, a tribute to placing Love on a pedestal to honor. No sin is this kind of love, my friend. Only fulfillment and a divine oneness to experience. A FAV for my collection! A worth entry for the contest. I sense great success with this offering ... in the contest and in love. A pleasure to read great poetry. Thank you. Bill
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Date: 1/30/2024 3:17:00 PM
stunning creation, Silent One. Certainly a pen worthy and smooth 'ode.' I especially liked these lines: Her love is like the sun rays of a new dawn, forever, ascending my heart with warmth." Exceptional at every turn...enjoy your evening, Sara
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Date: 1/30/2024 2:46:00 PM
wow, is this for Valentines day ? and if not it should be, lol, love it
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Date: 1/30/2024 1:49:00 PM
Exquisite in form and substance. Your object of desire is blessed indeed and from what you've written about her, so are you (I know I know, it's just fiction)
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Date: 1/30/2024 1:38:00 PM
Creative lines penned in this one. If it is for a contest, it seems like a good contender to me. Way to go. Thanks for sharing it with us and for dropping by my page. Sara K
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Date: 1/30/2024 1:21:00 PM
This is deliciously hot. I expect it will do very well.
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Date: 1/30/2024 12:46:00 PM
It's been some time since I wrote a love poem. Nasty muse :) Your poem is fabulous. You pull all the strings of poetic excellence.
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Date: 1/30/2024 1:10:00 PM
I've seen you write plenty of romantic poems dear Victor.. Thank you.
Date: 1/30/2024 12:04:00 PM
Exceptional penetrating poetic spell of words and emotion, so, Kelli
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