Last Dance and May I Have This Dance

Last Dance by Darren White Oh be my heart for me when it stops beating, My lungs to breathe thin air still far too chill, My feet to dance the world while I’m still living As they still want but now no longer will. Be my two arms and tug me in our tango— Flamenco palo, wrap your wings around My lithe frame, chant me our concluding canto With all the strength in us you somehow found. Oh sit with me and reminisce those dances… Pure, perfect passion, smile and lift your head, Observe illuminated skies above you… We meet again, we’ll waltz soon in Atlantis. With you here, there is nothing that I dread, Do not be sad, this is not an adieu.
May I Have This Dance? My heart beats a steady rhythm Gale winds won't take my breath Your feet on top of mine can dance all ebullient And if your arms get tired, mine will hold your weight No wings here-I am mortal Let our spirits of freedom sate And soar across the heavens, through the Milky Way You are a bright lit candle-the flame will not go out For I am keeper of the lighthouse Scribing every nuance Your words shine so, mi Estrella Living words that sing and sway Sometimes rhyming, artful placing Every syllable is etched to stay So, light the path of your life’s passions Each word a heartfelt view Dance for everyone to follow-learn the beauty that is you.
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Cresswell Avatar
November 25, 2017 at 1:02 PM
This is a treasure for always. It made my soul sing such yearning.
Walker Avatar
June 30, 2017 at 10:55 AM
Just beautiful Sara, a lovely poem Darren has inspired in you. I really enjoyed them both and the fact they are both posted here together made them even better :)
Ella Avatar
June 30, 2017 at 1:30 PM
Thank you so much Lenna :) speaking of inspirational poets-you are too!
Sands Avatar
June 17, 2017 at 10:03 AM
I just came over to see this Sara. How did I miss this beauty? I was fully drawn into this. Congratulations on the outstanding write. So nice to see poets like Darren be an inspiration :)
Ella Avatar
June 17, 2017 at 10:51 AM
Thank you Heidi :) I am rather new to PS but have found good friends and writing inspiration here. <3
Sathasivam Avatar
June 7, 2017 at 12:41 AM
Excellent. Well penned. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.
Ella Avatar
June 7, 2017 at 5:29 AM
Thank you Ravi :)
Vaso Avatar
June 6, 2017 at 8:00 PM
Congrats on POTD, well deserved, I read this a few days ago, just wasn't logged in to comment on what a great poem this is!! :)
Ella Avatar
June 6, 2017 at 8:48 PM
Thank you Arthur :) or was totally inspired by Darren's poem <3 <3 <3
Wolf Avatar
June 6, 2017 at 1:12 PM
Sara, this is a wonderful write, I really mean it! You sure can write girlfriend! And yes, Darren (Duir) is a great inspiration to us all! Please keep writing!
Ella Avatar
June 6, 2017 at 1:20 PM
Thank you so much Budgie <3 :) I will! :D
White Avatar
June 5, 2017 at 6:35 AM
PotD, isn't it wonderful my friend? <3 <3 <3
Ella Avatar
June 5, 2017 at 6:58 PM
Totally AWESOME! :D <3 \o/
Williams Avatar
June 5, 2017 at 4:34 AM
Congratulations on POTD Sara, so lovely, and what a splendid response to Darren's lovely poem. So food all around......Maria
Ella Avatar
June 5, 2017 at 6:32 AM
Thank you Maria :)
Roper Avatar
June 5, 2017 at 12:57 AM
Sara, congratulations on POTD! Well done.
Ella Avatar
June 5, 2017 at 1:13 AM
Thank you Eve :) This was inspired by Darren's beautiful poem. <3
Bateman Avatar
June 4, 2017 at 7:53 PM
Sara, Congratulations on POTD!! A wondrously composed free verse here by you and Darren. Beautiful language and very uplifting. Cheers and Best, Gary
Ella Avatar
June 4, 2017 at 9:48 PM
Thank you for your very nice comments, Gary :) I wish you all the best as well <3
Downing  Avatar
June 4, 2017 at 2:40 PM
Hi Sara, what an outstanding inspiring poem you have written. Totally heartfelt and well, absolutley BEAUTIFUL. I love it, and congrats on a potd... hugs :)
Ella Avatar
June 4, 2017 at 5:15 PM
Thank you, Akkina! :D Darren's poem is the inspiration <3 Hugs back!!!
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June 4, 2017 at 10:11 AM
So touching..brought tears to my eyes. Congrats on the well-deserved selection. :)
Ella Avatar
June 4, 2017 at 2:17 PM
Sunlite, thank you so much <3 Hugs to you :)
Y. Avatar
June 4, 2017 at 10:08 AM
Hi Sara, This is sooo beautiful and poetic. It's a nice reply to Darren's poem. Congratulations to you both. It was well deserved:-) Alexis
Ella Avatar
June 4, 2017 at 2:14 PM
Isn't Darren's poem wonderful? :D Thank you Alexis <3
Wanter Avatar
June 4, 2017 at 10:06 AM
One of the most beautiful I have seen on PS! Congratulations. A fav for me.
Ella Avatar
June 4, 2017 at 2:13 PM
<3 :) Thank you so much, Sunlite! Yay for the fav! \o/
Smith Avatar
June 4, 2017 at 8:50 AM
Lovely...Congratulations Sara for POTD honors so very well deserved.
Ella Avatar
June 4, 2017 at 9:21 AM
Thank you so much Charlie - Darren's beautiful poem was the inspiration :)
May Avatar
June 4, 2017 at 7:38 AM
A beautiful poetic dance ..Congrats to both of you on POtd
Ella Avatar
June 4, 2017 at 8:35 AM
Thank you so much Joseph :) Darren's words dance so well! This is a wonderful surprise <3
Smith Avatar
June 4, 2017 at 7:02 AM
Congratulations Sara
Ella Avatar
June 4, 2017 at 8:31 AM
Good Morning Tim and thank you! :)
Andresen Avatar
June 4, 2017 at 6:55 AM
- A wonderfully beautiful poem ( X 2) .... CONGRATULATIONS to both of you ... a gem :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Ella Avatar
June 4, 2017 at 8:17 AM
THANK YOU SO MUCH, Anna-Lise :) Hugs back to you! <3
Ricci Avatar
June 4, 2017 at 6:29 AM
Good Morning Sara. Congratulations on your entry being Chosen POTD. Hiya Darren congratulations to you also. Enjoy all the way.
Ella Avatar
June 4, 2017 at 8:15 AM
Thank you so much, Lisa! <3 This was a wonderful surprise this morning :D
Pigeon Tart Avatar
June 4, 2017 at 6:14 AM
Wonderful, wonderful, WONDERFUL!
Pigeon Tart Avatar
June 4, 2017 at 6:17 PM
;)
Ella Avatar
June 4, 2017 at 7:57 AM
Thank you, thank you, THANK YOU! :D
Lane Avatar
June 4, 2017 at 5:42 AM
Being out of town, I've missed reading these two fantastic writes. Well done and congrats to you Sara. And Darren, if you read this, your words dance for you.
Ella Avatar
June 4, 2017 at 7:55 AM
Thank you Lin! :) This certainly is a wonderful surprise to wake up to! I agree that Darren's words dance <3 Hope you have a wonderful day!
White Avatar
June 3, 2017 at 8:18 AM
Sara, it is so beautiful, your poem, incredibly beautiful. And I am so honoured that you wrote a reply to my poem. Love you, my friend :) <3
Ella Avatar
June 3, 2017 at 9:01 AM
You shine my friend-love you too :) <3 Thank you for being you!
Smith Avatar
June 3, 2017 at 7:05 AM
A beautiful poem and tribute to Darren. He is a great friend, poet, and ray of sunshine.
Ella Avatar
June 3, 2017 at 7:54 AM
Thank you Tim :) Yes, he is exactly that. I hope you have a good day, my friend.
Ricci Avatar
June 3, 2017 at 6:22 AM
Hello Again Sara. Now I see. Thank you. And yes, congratulations to you both for sharing such exquisite poetry. You continuation and addition to the first part is perfect. And now Miss Sara I am closing the computer. Have a wonderful morning and weekend. May everyone know the magic and wonderful of dance. Honestly
Ricci Avatar
June 3, 2017 at 6:14 AM
Good Morning Miss Sara. This entry is stunningly beautiful and yes very poetic in its execution and thought. Was this written by you or Darren. I'm sorry if I'm confused. Dance and the concept of dance I know has special meaning for Darren and it also has special meaning in life itself and the passion of life and romance. I was just about to close the computer but I am so honored and privileged that I noticed this entry. I hope this day finds you well. Thank you for sharing. Well done completely and entirely. -- s m i l e --
Ella Avatar
June 3, 2017 at 6:17 AM
Good Morning Lisa :) Thank you for your wonderful comments. Darren wrote the poem Last Dance and I just added to it with May I Have This Dance? I hope you have a good day <3
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