Last Confession

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my poetry the roadmap to where i have been and where i am today an open book uncoded without guile no need to decipher yet you wait for admission as frail as it may be what if my wall crumbles then what then what AP: Honorable Mention 2022 Submitted on December 21, 2022 for contest YOUR CHOICE 2022 sponsored by BRIAN STRAND - RANKED 10TH and July 9, 2022 for contest 2022 POETRY MARATHON MILE 7 sponsored by MARK TONEY Originally posted on July 7, 2022

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Jcb Brul

Date: 12/24/2022 12:19:00 AM

So much grace and tenderness in this short poem.I love the, " then what then what". A fave for me.

Line Gauthier
Date: 12/24/2022 7:51:00 AM

Thanks for the lovely compliment, JCB. Happy holidays ! Happy New Year to you ~

Sally Eslinger

Date: 7/10/2022 7:51:00 AM

Brilliant work for marathon theme! Confession, open course, open you, a marathon run “hitting the wall,” your own wall … what then, ?… i would imagine: the new end would need a “new” last confessionAs Godot kept saying, “And so it goes.” Just the thought-run this Fine poem sparked for me. Thank you!

Line Gauthier
Date: 7/10/2022 9:02:00 PM

Thank you very much for your most appreciated comment, Sally ~

Robert Gorelick

Date: 7/8/2022 11:34:00 AM

Bon voyage, you have a very select entourage. Robert

Line Gauthier
Date: 7/8/2022 7:03:00 PM

Thanks, Robert ~ have a great day