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Last Call For Broken Hearts

The lights are dim the music low the thought of going home alone is breaking hearts it’s written on their faces the pain returning like the tide their eyes screaming silent pleas for someone anyone to take them home tonight posted on November 5, 2019 AP: Honorable Mention 2020

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Date: 11/7/2019 12:46:00 AM
Love this one, reminds me of my poem "Bar Life", check it out. Well Done Miss Line
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Date: 11/7/2019 12:50:00 AM
I will check it out, Timothy. Thanks for your visit and comment.
Date: 11/6/2019 11:30:00 PM
Very poignant... your description of this is so very true to life! Well done!
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Date: 11/7/2019 12:02:00 AM
Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Rhona.
Date: 11/6/2019 7:54:00 AM
I see that sad tone in my friend’s eyes. So hard to be brave and not sell yourself.
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Date: 11/6/2019 10:26:00 AM
Yes, it's sad, Kim. Thanks for your visit and comment.
Date: 11/6/2019 2:02:00 AM
"screaming silent pleas" - yes, and often their over eagerness is what frightens others into running out without them.
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Date: 11/6/2019 2:18:00 AM
Yes, somehow being desperate is not appealing.
Date: 11/5/2019 11:00:00 PM
Wow, this reached me deeply. Well written Line :)
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Date: 11/5/2019 11:53:00 PM
Thanks for your lovely visit and compliment, Heidi.

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