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Las Animas

Las Animas Light intones creeping darkness in unfinished overtures Of fallen leaves scraping against a broken path Like distant footsteps faintly heard in rising mists Of incensed passages leading to a yard In growing shadows where life reflects back to life With dates that start and end in chiseled granite, Stone angels keeping watch, upon this night of hallows, Passing through a creaking door, silently closing in swirling fog, To feel an outstretched palm hovering above the spine – Skin rising up in prickly terror with sweating palms As trembling hands brush at unseen cobwebs Like brittle tendrils caressing red hot cheeks Uncooled by moaning winds of twisted chaos - Stumbling in a dance macabre of shades when two worlds collide Until twelve bells releases fiery fingers of unheard screams As las animas finds stars upon the other side of midnight. 9-24-19

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Date: 10/31/2020 6:00:00 AM
Congrats on your winner. Way to go. Very descriptive of this autumn. Sara
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 10/31/2020 9:56:00 AM
Hi Sara! Thank you for your congrats! Growing up there was a small, historic cemetery behind our neighborhood. We would go in there at night and scare ourselves silly. Those experiences laid the foundation for this poem. All the best! Harvest blessings to you!
Date: 10/30/2020 9:10:00 PM
Well done #1, the night before Halloween, Sam! Big congrats and spooky blessings, my friend!
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 10/31/2020 9:53:00 AM
Thank you my friend! I wanted to try and capture some of that spine tingling, hair raising, "boo!" of Halloween all the while knowing we are rejoicing in the victory over death! Clubhouse feeling a little haunted! Eat! Drink! and be Scary - just for tonight! :o
Date: 3/20/2020 8:41:00 PM
Sam, the spooky story is something I've never done. You do it so well! Great images ~ John
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 3/21/2020 1:11:00 PM
Hi John, again thank you for your insightful messages! They are so helpful as I continue writing!! This piece was originally written one Halloween night, then edited. I love the spookiness of that night - not the gruesome or horrific of current films. Was hoping to capture that feeling through images that were visceral.
Date: 12/8/2019 1:41:00 PM
wow, such description!! You write GREAT, Sam. I see this was a win . CONGRATULATIONS
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 12/9/2019 3:49:00 PM
Hi Andrea. Thank you for your words of encouragement. Once again, I am honored by your feedback and blessed by your "congrats."
Date: 9/28/2019 11:37:00 PM
Love how you built the scare. Congrats on your win.
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 10/14/2019 1:31:00 PM
Hi Jeanne, Thank you for your feedback. This was a fun theme as I love the spookiness of Halloween!
Date: 9/28/2019 2:02:00 PM
Sam great write and congratulations on your win in the contest!
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 10/14/2019 1:34:00 PM
Thank you for your good wishes and congratulations. I am so glad that you enjoyed this poem as much as I enjoyed writing it.
Date: 9/28/2019 12:21:00 PM
Sam, congratulations on your winning placement with your eerie poem!
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 10/14/2019 1:39:00 PM
Hi Tania, Thank you for this wonderful theme at this time of ghosts, goblins and things that go bump in the night!

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