Larry Says,

Larry grazes my arm
with a tint of hope in his
Jack Daniel eyes and says, 
You're the prettiest thing in this bar. 

I've searched for 
closed hearts and 
hungry hands 
like his before
to fill the empty dens
of my heart. 

And I could 
fold under the 
curtains of night, 
and tuck away my shame 
for a while.

He says,
You sure are pretty, but
I can make you feel beautiful
for at least a night. 

But instead I say,
No thanks, Larry,
I already have a 
closet full of skeletons
that I can sleep with
tonight.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Nunez Avatar
November 13, 2015 at 7:17 PM
Go, girl! Witty and pretty package of a poetic soul...you don't need Larry indeed. Keep the words coming! hugs!
Elizab Avatar
November 16, 2015 at 2:40 PM
Thank you so much, Kim!
Boddie Avatar
November 13, 2015 at 5:29 PM
the wrong approach....will surely be revoked....but under that bottle actions may certainly vary....he failed to add his skeleton, fault by larry....lol....I needed that laugh Felicia thank you....;)
Elizab Avatar
November 16, 2015 at 2:40 PM
You're welcome, Eric! Thanks for reading :)
Tidd Avatar
November 13, 2015 at 9:06 AM
I had immediate visions of a Leisure Suit Larry in a Western bar for some reason.
Elizab Avatar
November 13, 2015 at 9:08 AM
That is pretty accurate lol!
Muideen Avatar
November 13, 2015 at 7:49 AM
Lol! What a wonderful and beautiful piece here my friend. I love how it sounds. Excellent one..........A.M.
Elizab Avatar
November 13, 2015 at 10:06 AM
Thank you, Afolabi!!
Lane Avatar
November 12, 2015 at 10:31 PM
I'm so glad you're getting all of this out, Felicia...keep it going. Your muse is screaming to escape.
Elizab Avatar
November 13, 2015 at 10:08 AM
Thank you again, Lin! This is one of my older ones that I re-worked.
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