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Lark Tanka

A week old hatchling The mother lark feeds with love White clouds come above Sudden tempest ruins all Solar eclipse in lark town _________________________________ May 25, 2016 For Traditional Tanka - Poetry Contest Sponsor: Charlotte Jade Puddifoot

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Date: 8/24/2017 11:46:00 AM
I know it's not meant to be a humorous poem, but I found it to be so, Probir. The imagery perhaps. Either way, it is a fine, fine poem. The struggle in nature gives us great insight. A triumphant poem of love. Love and peace .
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Date: 5/28/2016 8:03:00 AM
A lovely, loving image, Probir, even though the tempest tried its best to change it! gl in the contest. // paul
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Probir Gupta
Date: 5/28/2016 11:05:00 AM
Thanks and regards...

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