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Lanternes again

masks deceive let them slip what is revealed mars speak listen beyond words what is felt here crushed oh ok OMG well I never gosh dog snuggles completely sooth my singed soul thanks fear jackal as it hunts without signal strike

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Joe Dimino

Date: 11/17/2023 9:21:00 AM

Excellent poetry! Cleverly executed. Sometimes short works are more interesting, lingering in the affection longer than, complex meandering diatribes -- yours a perfect example of wonderful brevity. Enjoyed very much.

Di11y Da11y
Date: 11/17/2023 9:32:00 AM

Ahh thank you Joe - I'll perhaps write another page full whilst I'm motivated :)

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 11/17/2023 8:41:00 AM

I especially like the 2d one and last one. I think you've got the hang of this thing. Well done, Di11y! Have a splendid weekend, Sara

Di11y Da11y
Date: 11/17/2023 8:50:00 AM

Thank you Sara, I still feel there will be an angle that elevates the form, I imagine the contest will close before I get the inspiration haha enjoy your weekend x