Language of Neruda's Heart

Because of you, in gardens of blossoming Flowers I ache from the perfumes of spring. I have forgotten your face, I no longer Remember your hands; how did your lips Feel on mine? Because of you, I love the white statues Drowsing in the parks, the white statues that Have neither voice nor sight. I have forgotten your voice, your happy voice; I have forgotten your eyes. ~ excerpts from Pablo Neruda’s poem, “Love”
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Flushed hands spill passion, softly wild In a languid explosion you rise With threads and threads of angst piled Spewing flamed embers’ cries And I feel your veins in my chest From twilight laced I rile again Down fingertips my soul’s unrest To drain on verses from your pen A language of fire scents my mood, That marks thorns when love and rage twine. Sweet flowers ache as plucked lyres brood On frail stars, veiled light breaks my spine Dear Neruda, salt of heart clears Offering balm of gentle smears Tribute Verse Contest of Brian Strand
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Taylor Avatar
July 12, 2012 at 6:35 PM
Congrats, nette. Excellent. Nice going, my friend. Kudos. hugs, Ralph
Brown Avatar
July 12, 2012 at 8:05 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Francine's "Tribute By Sonnet" contest Nette. Love, Carol
Williams Avatar
July 12, 2012 at 3:20 AM
Nette, congrats on your win...David
Roberts Avatar
July 11, 2012 at 10:45 PM
congrats on your 8th place win nette, a joy to read
Kendrick Avatar
June 18, 2012 at 3:30 PM
Winning material for sure..Enjoyed reading this eve..Thanks for the kind review of my work..I hope that your day has been good..Sara
Sivey Avatar
June 18, 2012 at 11:39 AM
This is a beautiful write my dear friend! I was transfixed while reading your poem stemming from Neruda's write "Love"! The aura about it brought a smile to my humbled face! You sure do know how to bring life into a poem, I love your write immensely Nette! Great Work!!
Nair Avatar
June 18, 2012 at 9:11 AM
O, nette, how sweet of you to think of the great Neruda, one of my top favs, thank u so much for this tribute to him, :) Jag
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June 18, 2012 at 5:11 AM
Sweet tender write here..so calming and beautifully written..love it!!! Good luck in the contest!!
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June 18, 2012 at 1:06 AM
Nobel Poetry Prize for you from me on this lovely poem nette - wish you luck in contet.Have a beautiful new week !!! - oxox love Anne-Lise
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