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Language of Poets

LANGUAGE OF POETS For a moment let’s linguistically speak. Men have their self imposed limit They choose to make their language bleak To women it’s nonsense – no word is unfit No man would normally say It was a delightful day Or a child is so sweet or lovable Or a cat so cute or adorable Or that pretty pink flowers are – well - Pretty pink flowers….hell, We’re guys after all and, Hey, We can’t allow ourselves to say A certain forbidden word A word that shouldn’t be heard. Other men may think we’re Not real men - they won’t come near. Imagine if Keats felt that way His love’s “tender taken breath”, say, * Would have to become ”her wheezing” To allow for male-listener pleasing Wordsworth “could not but be gay” ** He ‘d have to be just “kinda happy” - A lot more macho in its way And poetically kinda snappy. God preserve me from such buffoonery ‘Cos without doubt I’d sooner re- read Wordsworth or Keats Their words complete and effete are such treats. Note: * Bright Star, by John Keats ** I Wandered Lonely as a Cloud, by William Wordsworth

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Date: 11/30/2010 10:56:00 AM
VERY clever, Sydney. Love the way you translated the authors to modern-guy lingo. Now how would you change Robert Burns' "My love is like a red, red rose"? And to be honest, some of the men here write in more romantic language than some of the women. Guess they didn't get the message from the Boy's Club. LOL Best wishes, Carolyn
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Date: 11/30/2010 9:44:00 AM
sportsmen have little ideal what we are saying the lack the intelegence and the intrest. in other words if it's not running it does'nt concern them. but this was nicely put john
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