Landscapes of the Mind

We leave the womb, 
that place of warm safe-keeping,
and arrive to face our would-be lives
with nothing but a body and 
a landscape, ready-made 
but needing to be seeded
It's a pristine, faintly gleaming table of the mind.

Seeds of knowledge sown,
like clockwork, quickly grow,
nourished by the light 
or even by mere shadows of examples
and fostered by a daily rain of practice.
Saplings soon arise in normal, fertile minds.
How the woodland shines when it’s enlightened!

Time passes. The trees of each soul’s forest
get taller; some get statelier. . .but all get old.
What mystery it is to me why some
who wish to keep their woodland strong
are met with great misfortune.
A parasite attacks, and one by one,
their trees succumb.
Soon each mind of these unfortunate souls
regresses to a time when
it was but a primal vacant landscape 
with this exception. . . 
 the terrain is only rocky barren soil.
I wonder if they see in their last earthly moments
the glimmer of 
a brand new gleam
on their horizon.

June 29, 2020 for
Strand Completely New (3) Any Theme Any Form Poetry Contest
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Krutsinger Avatar
July 2, 2020 at 2:43 AM
This is such a testimony to the beauty and joy that is life on earth. I believe life after earth is even better; I think we each receive what we expect to receive on both planes.
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
July 1, 2020 at 10:41 PM
A deepness that was illuminated, --remarkably done, Andrea, awesome rendering, and my compliments for your 1st Place win, Kudos! -- Aloha~@William
Watt Avatar
July 1, 2020 at 4:21 PM
Ah, a hearty congratulations for your 1st place win, my friend, with this very touching write.
Brewer Avatar
July 1, 2020 at 5:24 AM
An evocative allegory of life with shades of dark and light. Striking images well described, Andrea.
Michael Avatar
June 30, 2020 at 12:13 PM
Maybe...from death to birth...who knows...no one came back to say...You've described coming into the light of this world...
Cunningham Avatar
June 30, 2020 at 2:53 AM
Love this one, from the spark of life to the grave. Good luck in the contest Tom
Horsman Avatar
June 29, 2020 at 10:23 PM
This is so wonderful Andrea, a human personification i feel as i read the in-depth of your mind. This poem says so much, about life, yet in a different way..I'm very strict with my favourite list, but this as just got to go there...
Blown Avatar
June 29, 2020 at 6:38 PM
….one far out w-right....stan sand
Bianco Avatar
June 29, 2020 at 6:35 PM
yes
Bayles Avatar
June 29, 2020 at 5:09 PM
I really like your first stanza.
Watt Avatar
June 29, 2020 at 4:34 PM
I wonder that as well, Andrea. This is such a thoughtful and poignant write, even philosophical in its musings. Beautiful metaphor of our personality as the forest, with seeds being planted and nurtured by rain and growing into different qualities of tree. Love it! Best wishes in the contest. Hugs ~ John
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