Notes About The Poem

  • Two souls growing old
  • Turning every color into gold 
  • For all the days of their lives
  • Laminated Love 
    After: Blue and Green Music - Georgia O'Keeffe 1921 

Laminated Love

Frozen flames pressed between each sheet
I flip every page while taking notes
Censoring every event in my past 
I fall deep when staring at the painting on the wall	
Every blink feels the same when in love  
However, on this one night, I stumbled 
On a certain page, I found my heart beating twice
The roof at this moment allowed the moon to illuminate inside.	
A memory unfolded while I held your hand, 	
Repainting our years, a devoted love
At the heart of everything, I've forgotten this feeling
The canvas opens more than an old chapter
the beautiful canvas, tied by solid gold.
Flames brush every wall as we age as one	
In perfect harmony. TOGETHER 
Laminating our love forever

1-06-2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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May Avatar
March 26, 2022 at 9:02 AM
Beautiful love poem! Very touching!
Wood Avatar
August 3, 2017 at 3:05 PM
This is beautiful Destroyer A. It reminds me of 40 years with my wife. Thank you.
Cortez Avatar
November 3, 2016 at 8:47 PM
hi Linda this piece is best tor lovers enjoying life... you did a good description of what love is ... thanks it reminds me that happiness is not just a word.
Acen Avatar
October 5, 2016 at 8:57 AM
Beautiful poem, Poet Destroyer. Fascinating! I love the first lines especially.
Robinson Jr. Avatar
October 3, 2016 at 10:24 PM
Oh, forgot to mention, the monkey sent me. Love you, love.
Robinson Jr. Avatar
October 3, 2016 at 10:20 PM
A very fascinating poem, PD. Pure elegance and emotive. You make ME wanna hold your hand. You have the gift, no doubt about that. Your words are so expressive and concise. Straight to the heart, straight to the point. Love your work, will continue to immerse my myself in your poems. Ty for sharing your wonderful talent w/us, your Highness. Love, peace and joy to you and yours.
Nusker Avatar
August 14, 2016 at 4:10 AM
Beautifully written. It's like a portrait of a poem entwined with each other.
Marie Avatar
August 6, 2016 at 6:54 PM
Your gorgeous words danced to life in magnificent Technicolor with this stunning piece! That it is a specific genre of poetry (I am learning!) and about Love is truly astounding given the tenderness and care that each word was so meticulously chosen for their maximum effect. Showcases your amazing talent and an absolute pleasure to read! blessings, lynn
Day Avatar
August 6, 2016 at 5:57 AM
You offered your pen as a stroke of a brush - beautifully composed! Congrats on your win!
Allison Avatar
August 5, 2016 at 4:24 PM
Stunning image and imagery Linda congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
Devnath  Avatar
August 5, 2016 at 12:33 PM
Congrats on your win my *friend. Hugs, Cloudy poet
Roper Avatar
August 5, 2016 at 10:04 AM
Congratulations on your win sweet girl! Hugs Eve
Ink-U-Script Avatar
July 5, 2016 at 12:39 AM
Great piece to read before bed. I enjoy reading love poems...excellent piece!!!
Abuelo Avatar
June 27, 2016 at 11:24 PM
This piece has a wonderful flow.
Dalei Avatar
April 18, 2016 at 12:09 AM
Superb. A great poem. A super 7 from me. Entire poem is sound with amazing literature.I enjoyed............hugs
Liwayway Avatar
April 5, 2016 at 12:43 PM
Wow!! excellent poem as always. two thumbs up!! :) thanks for sharing and just to say hello to you. Hugs :) Maria
La France Avatar
March 21, 2016 at 1:21 PM
Linda, oh this is so beautifully penned, a real treasure and I am loving it 7 ~
Raven Avatar
March 20, 2016 at 4:20 PM
Hi Linda, this is one of those little gems that can so easily pass by unnoticed because of its complete simplicity. Simplistic in design and yet it says so much. Love can flow with each pass of your pen over the paper, painting your visions, forever to be laid bare before the reader. Need i say it is an excellent work? Indeed it is Linda. A definite seven from me and it goes into my faves,,,,Vlad.
Terano Avatar
March 20, 2016 at 9:23 AM
this is love indeed. Photo Album style? Not sure, but the memories have to reside somewhere... great stuff.
Gour Avatar
March 16, 2016 at 5:33 AM
I am fortunate to have read this wonderful poem.. you write so well.. the chosen words were very beautiful... you have become my inspiration :) wish to read your upcoming poems soon.. your new poet friend >garvita<
Peterson Avatar
March 15, 2016 at 2:09 PM
This poem is so engaging and tender. Your carefully chosen words summon vivid reality to each moment, space, color, heat and touch.
Dietrich Avatar
March 5, 2016 at 2:02 PM
Coming back to this gem to say hi. I did not see you around for a while. Hope you are ok, PD!!
Williams Gault Avatar
March 1, 2016 at 10:48 PM
This was an intricately woven tapestry. What a work of art.
Gasun Avatar
February 29, 2016 at 8:59 AM
Hello my dearest sis! It's my great honor and pleasure to stop by once again tonight to read and enjoy this very precious and excellent piece of yours! If ever I missed to fave it, I'll fave it again. Kudos to you! love lots, your forever number 1 fan, sis-BFF, Leonora
Sewe Avatar
February 29, 2016 at 3:43 AM
Great write. I love it
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