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LAMENT "You will forget me, the love we once shared Has vanished in the attempt at disguise. The dreams we once knew can't be repaired It's gone with the light that once lit your eyes" Romance rolled to predict ‘we would never be apart.’ Unleashing your passion, you dared to propose. Emotion was entwined from you to my heart. Couldn’t imagine door of heart, you will close. Territory of love was built in vain. Facile feeling in guise of love got coiled. Love terminated in inevitable pain. I was devoted, but destiny spoiled. Days rolling, scrolling on bliss and rapture turned mournful chapters of our love-story. Lamented lovers flunked to grasp and capture amour, losing ecstasy and glory. 05/07/21 Second Place 'Choose Your Form' Contest by Joseph May Second Place '"L"' New or Old Form Contest by Constance La France

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Date: 9/22/2021 11:27:00 AM
We do lament what we have lost. Well said. Congratulations for your win. Blessings Anisha.
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Date: 9/22/2021 9:58:00 AM
Anisha, congratulations on your win in my L contest with your wonderful poem, splendid writing~ love and serenity _Constance
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Date: 9/16/2021 10:18:00 AM
"Territory of love was built in vain. Facile feeling in guise of love got coiled." Beautiful Work. Congratulations!
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Date: 5/18/2021 2:50:00 PM
beautiful in its sadness, many congrats on your win:-) hug jan xx
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Date: 5/14/2021 6:02:00 AM
Romantic predictions of forever can "lose its glory", Very nicely penned Anisha, Congrats on your win
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Date: 5/7/2021 12:30:00 PM
You describe it well...at the moment and at the time.
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Anisha Dutta
Date: 5/7/2021 9:48:00 PM
Thanks Michael. Blessings

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