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After Frido Kahlo’s Roots
Others think my hair
      wild,            untamed, 
             needing a coif
when all about me the wind
       rustles 
              through the fallen leaves…
red on gold, 
               stamped brown, 
                                         ethereal...
substance once there, 
                                         gone
like soup 
                           cooked for hours
to fight the chill, 
                       tang of parsnip…
that’s the visible crop, 
                                   bushy froth
while beneath soil,               
                              fight
the war 
              for a strand or lock or two
of my being...
              heart untied from children
hands freed 
                   to tap or zizzle a bow
across strings
      what a jumble it all is
after the clean
                       prepped 
                                     pampered
soul is emptied
                    scraped down to metal
my hair  
                        unwound into myself 
              swelling 
                        as if a clogged pore 
and I’m wondering...
                   is there is any
                         who know 
how I look 
                                          undressed.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 3/31/2014 11:26:00 PM
A delicate and wonderful piece. Very nicely done!
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Date: 2/22/2014 11:30:00 PM
The wild abandon of your line structure marries beautifully with the theme of this piece. A wonderfully extended metaphor. I enjoyed this a lot.
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Date: 3/1/2014 7:22:00 PM
Thanks much Gary!
Date: 11/7/2013 12:26:00 PM
Sheri, , brilliant imagery... nice win * HUGS & LOVE <3 ~SKAT~
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Date: 10/29/2013 8:30:00 AM
This is cool...The format really fits the subject. BG soup mail
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Date: 10/18/2013 2:38:00 PM
Oh wow......I am so glad I tapped into your poetry...this format, simply adds to the free-verse style, and clever use of your message.......self introspection is a difficult thing to admit. I will have to see more of your poems. And ps......thanks very much for the HM in your contest! :)
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Date: 10/18/2013 10:38:00 AM
This was so well done both the message and the disjointed visual approach. I like it a lot. Thanks for listing my poem amongst the winners in your contest.
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Date: 10/18/2013 7:08:00 AM
aww stop making fun of yourself! you know I do it all the time too, but we're just trying to make a pre-emptive strike so others will back off, you know what it doesn't help BIG hugs, sorry I didn't list personification as the form in the contest, IT WAS personification I thought that was enough? XXXOOO
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Date: 10/18/2013 5:51:00 AM
Interesting work..Thanks for the notice of my work..My poem written in Poulter's Measure was about a Rooster which is in the poultry family..You know a male chicken..I don't know if you know about Poulter's measure or not..It is in the online enclycopedia..Thanks again...Sara
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Date: 10/18/2013 2:36:00 AM
What a marvel,love your grand style and deep meaning. Thanks for appreciating my poem,thought to personify giving life to it-i.e attributing life to it and addressing it as human. Am honored for your noble visit. I.B.E
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Date: 10/10/2013 10:08:00 PM
this is deep and sincere poetry. Very cool format. I am interested in knowing if you are British or American or another nationality. I have a poem in your contest and someone told me the word was misspelled, but it's correct by american standards!!
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Date: 9/11/2013 5:20:00 PM
Very interesting poem. I honestly enjoyed reading this well written work. You really added near perfection with the last line.... Go girl...Jake
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