Notes About The Poem
After Frido Kahlo’s Roots

Lake Bed Refractions

Others think my hair
      wild,            untamed, 
             needing a coif
when all about me the wind
       rustles 
              through the fallen leaves…
red on gold, 
               stamped brown, 
                                         ethereal...
substance once there, 
                                         gone
like soup 
                           cooked for hours
to fight the chill, 
                       tang of parsnip…
that’s the visible crop, 
                                   bushy froth
while beneath soil,               
                              fight
the war 
              for a strand or lock or two
of my being...
              heart untied from children
hands freed 
                   to tap or zizzle a bow
across strings
      what a jumble it all is
after the clean
                       prepped 
                                     pampered
soul is emptied
                    scraped down to metal
my hair  
                        unwound into myself 
              swelling 
                        as if a clogged pore 
and I’m wondering...
                   is there is any
                         who know 
how I look 
                                          undressed.
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Marlatt Lll Avatar
March 31, 2014 at 11:26 PM
A delicate and wonderful piece. Very nicely done!
Watkins Avatar
February 22, 2014 at 11:30 PM
The wild abandon of your line structure marries beautifully with the theme of this piece. A wonderfully extended metaphor. I enjoyed this a lot.
Harper Avatar
March 1, 2014 at 7:22 PM
Thanks much Gary!
A  Avatar
November 7, 2013 at 12:26 PM
Sheri, , brilliant imagery... nice win * HUGS & LOVE <3 ~SKAT~
Gorelick Avatar
October 29, 2013 at 8:30 AM
This is cool...The format really fits the subject. BG soup mail
Richards Avatar
October 18, 2013 at 2:38 PM
Oh wow......I am so glad I tapped into your poetry...this format, simply adds to the free-verse style, and clever use of your message.......self introspection is a difficult thing to admit. I will have to see more of your poems. And ps......thanks very much for the HM in your contest! :)
Lamoureux Avatar
October 18, 2013 at 10:38 AM
This was so well done both the message and the disjointed visual approach. I like it a lot. Thanks for listing my poem amongst the winners in your contest.
Guzzi Avatar
October 18, 2013 at 7:08 AM
aww stop making fun of yourself! you know I do it all the time too, but we're just trying to make a pre-emptive strike so others will back off, you know what it doesn't help BIG hugs, sorry I didn't list personification as the form in the contest, IT WAS personification I thought that was enough? XXXOOO
Kendrick Avatar
October 18, 2013 at 5:51 AM
Interesting work..Thanks for the notice of my work..My poem written in Poulter's Measure was about a Rooster which is in the poultry family..You know a male chicken..I don't know if you know about Poulter's measure or not..It is in the online enclycopedia..Thanks again...Sara
Ekechukwu Avatar
October 18, 2013 at 2:36 AM
What a marvel,love your grand style and deep meaning. Thanks for appreciating my poem,thought to personify giving life to it-i.e attributing life to it and addressing it as human. Am honored for your noble visit. I.B.E
Dietrich Avatar
October 10, 2013 at 10:08 PM
this is deep and sincere poetry. Very cool format. I am interested in knowing if you are British or American or another nationality. I have a poem in your contest and someone told me the word was misspelled, but it's correct by american standards!!
Posey Avatar
September 11, 2013 at 5:20 PM
Very interesting poem. I honestly enjoyed reading this well written work. You really added near perfection with the last line.... Go girl...Jake
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