Lake

so serene and calm clear mirror of splendid clouds ˜ skating ring of swans Aug 15, 2022 4.05pm Note: My room is overlooking the lake lined with swans Aug 15, 2022 4.05pm Nature Themed Haiku Contest Judged: 8/22/2022 4:37:00 AM Sponsored by: Tania Kitchin Place 2 ( up to 5 multi-w)

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/25/2022 1:26:00 PM

back with my congratulations. A well deserved win

Len Gasun
Date: 8/26/2022 1:53:00 AM

Thank you for your congratulatory greetings my dear friend Andra, God bless you always. Hugs

Bill Baker

Date: 8/23/2022 2:00:00 PM

Congratulations on the 2nd place in the contest, Len. Way to go! It is a lovely Haiku, the imagery was excellent. A poet friend in Texas, Bill

Len Gasun
Date: 8/24/2022 8:52:00 AM

Thank you so much for your congratulatory greetings and your very uplifting words my dear friend Bill. I will also visit your page soon if you don't mind. Thanks a lot in advance. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 8/22/2022 1:13:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. A lovely "lake" write. Today, be blessed with your win...........

Len Gasun
Date: 8/22/2022 11:19:00 PM

Thank you so much for your uplifting words and your congratulatory greetings my dear friend Paula. God bless you always. Hugs

Jcb Brul

Date: 8/22/2022 7:49:00 AM

Great haiku with vivid imagery. Congratulations my friend. A room with view like that is very calming. Blessings.^___^ JCB

Len Gasun
Date: 8/22/2022 11:19:00 PM

Thank you so much for your uplifting words and your congratulatory greetings my dear friend JCB. God bless you always. Hugs

Christuraj Alex

Date: 8/22/2022 7:46:00 AM

"mirror of splendid clouds" - Wow! Congratulations!

Len Gasun
Date: 8/22/2022 11:18:00 PM

Thank you so much for your uplifting words and your congratulatory greetings my dear friend Christuraj. God bless you always. Hugs

Tania Kitchin

Date: 8/22/2022 5:11:00 AM

Len, congratulations on your winning placement with your serene haiku, love the imagery!

Len Gasun
Date: 8/22/2022 11:17:00 PM

Thank you for acknowledging my poem in your contest my dear poetess and friend Tania. Your approval on my poem through my win means a lot to me. God bless you always. Hugs

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/16/2022 1:22:00 PM

this is VERY pretty

Len Gasun
Date: 8/19/2022 4:18:00 AM

Thank you so much for your uplifting comment my dear friend Andrea. Blessings. Hugs

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 8/15/2022 11:41:00 AM

Sounds lovely, Len! What a wonderful setting.

Len Gasun
Date: 8/19/2022 4:16:00 AM

Thank you so much for your uplifting message and visit my dear friend Kim. Blessings. Hugs