Ladybug

A red and black coat Small faces stop to admire Waiting for his flight

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 7/26/2009 5:30:00 PM

yup the cute and pesky! Light & Love

James Fraser

Date: 5/30/2009 7:37:00 AM

We call them ladybirds over here, and they are so lovely, nice write>James

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/21/2009 7:36:00 PM

This is so lovely, Barbara! When we were children, neighborhood kids used to play with ladybugs, carefully so as not to hurt them. They still bring smiles to our faces, just as this poem does. Sorry for the delay in the mail, but you have a letter in your box. (Was dealing with computer issues) Love, Carolyn

Donna Golden

Date: 5/21/2009 3:12:00 PM

Sweet little bit here, Barbara! Ladybugs always make me think of summer...and houses on fire! Haha! Have a beautiful day! Donna

Christopher Higgins

Date: 5/21/2009 8:24:00 AM

This is done well ...love the second line..images of curiousity comes to mind..seeing my two kids faces also..well done.

Nathan Leccese

Date: 5/20/2009 9:13:00 PM

Very good write. Funny how kids notice some of the smallest things. Thanks for the support on the tagging game. That was a lot of fun and a big challenge for me. I've never wrote a Choka before, but I couldn't let the "King" show me up with me being the prince now. lol Love Nate!

Carrie Richards

Date: 5/20/2009 12:56:00 PM

Yes....childhood memories...just as Sharon and Stacey recalled...I guess we all loved the ladybug !! ~ Carrie

Daver Austin

Date: 5/20/2009 8:35:00 AM

YES! I love children's stuff...Mother Goose....all about kids and their fancies. Big Love, daver

Ronald Bingham

Date: 5/20/2009 8:30:00 AM

Of all the bugs, ladybugs and lightning bug are my favorite. God Bless. Ron

Sharon Winter

Date: 5/20/2009 4:16:00 AM

I used to love ladybugs when I was little. Good luck I think they said? This brings back memories as I pictures little ones in awe. Sweet. Love, Shar