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Lady Wonder

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No, I ain’t wrote. I’ve been caught up In the greatest things they say Life has to offer. But, in the midst Of all my success, I find myself feeling Oddly like a pauper. And in my darkest Days and hours, I get to thinking of the time We spent together. Your whispers Never failed To set my brushes Hissing all across The canvases of summer. It’s strange of me To come back now, And it’s ok If you don’t remember, Cuz someone like you Must get her share Of sad and desperate letters. But all of the music Has faded now From this life That I’ve been living, And hearing your voice Just one more time Could set my whole World singing. My Lady Wonder. Since we last spoke My mind once busy With the great divine Has been riddled with reason. But wise men say ‘All things must pass,’ Even my malaise. It’s just one of life’s seasons. But when I look Upon my elders, Dusty, yawning, pot-bellied, And scared of dying, I get to thinking That the ones who say This boredom’s the norm Have all been lying. I know that I ain’t Been the best At dialing your number, But losing you’s The reason for This cloud that I’ve been under. So as you pass, Won’t you please allow Your garment for the touching? Heal these beggar’s eyes To see all the things That they’ve been missing. My Lady Wonder.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2025




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Date: 7/22/2025 3:07:00 PM
Is this your voice, Daniel? Such a cool song. It reminded me a little bit of folklore style like Bob Dylan or something. Loved the imagery of brushes hissing across canvasses of summer. Congrats on your well deserved win
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Daniel DuBois
Date: 7/22/2025 7:25:00 PM
Thanks, Andrea! Yeah, that brushes hissing line was one of those ones that just fell into my lap. Dontcha just love those magical lines that seem to fall out of the sky while most others have to be worked towards and aren't half as good? Serendipity, I guess. And apt observation hearing some Dylan in there. I'm a huge fan and he's influenced me a lot. : )
Date: 7/22/2025 5:58:00 AM
Love the guitar playing! Very talented and catchy! Are you playing and singing? I love the authentic quality of this verses an AI melody and voice. Congratulations! Xo
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Daniel DuBois
Date: 7/22/2025 7:23:00 PM
Thank you, Crystol! Yes, that's me playing and singing. I'm happy that this sounds nothing like AI. The words came from the heart and how I was feeling at the time, so I'm glad the authenticity comes across.
Date: 7/22/2025 4:37:00 AM
Infectious toe tapping tune! Congratulations on your win Daniel!
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Daniel DuBois
Date: 7/22/2025 7:21:00 PM
I really appreciate that, Karen. Thank you. If ya can get the toes-a-tappin, that's half the battle. : )
Date: 7/21/2025 6:26:00 PM
Congratulations for your placement in my 'make a song contest'. A fantastic song - very well done! I hope you will be inspired to add music and songs to more of your poems. Lets get more music here!!
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Daniel DuBois
Date: 7/22/2025 7:20:00 PM
I greatly appreciate the encouragement, John, and the opportunity to share my music and words with fellow artists. It means so much. Thank you again.

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