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Lady Wonder

No, I ain’t wrote.
I’ve been caught up
In the greatest things they say
Life has to offer.

But, in the midst
Of all my success,
I find myself feeling
Oddly like a pauper.

And in my darkest
Days and hours,
I get to thinking of the time
We spent together.

Your whispers
Never failed
To set my brushes
Hissing all across
The canvases of summer.

It’s strange of me
To come back now,
And it’s ok
If you don’t remember,

Cuz someone like you
Must get her share
Of sad and desperate letters.

But all of the music
Has faded now
From this life
That I’ve been living,

And hearing your voice
Just one more time
Could set my whole
World singing.

My Lady Wonder. 

Since we last spoke
My mind once busy
With the great divine
Has been riddled with reason.

But wise men say
‘All things must pass,’
Even my malaise.
It’s just one of life’s seasons.

But when I look
Upon my elders,
Dusty, yawning, pot-bellied,
And scared of dying,

I get to thinking
That the ones who say
This boredom’s the norm
Have all been lying.

I know that I ain’t
Been the best
At dialing your number,

But losing you’s
The reason for 
This cloud that I’ve been under.

So as you pass,
Won’t you please allow
Your garment for the touching?

Heal these beggar’s eyes
To see all the things
That they’ve been missing.

My Lady Wonder.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Dietrich Avatar
July 22, 2025 at 3:07 PM
Is this your voice, Daniel? Such a cool song. It reminded me a little bit of folklore style like Bob Dylan or something. Loved the imagery of brushes hissing across canvasses of summer. Congrats on your well deserved win
DuBois Avatar
July 22, 2025 at 7:25 PM
Thanks, Andrea! Yeah, that brushes hissing line was one of those ones that just fell into my lap. Dontcha just love those magical lines that seem to fall out of the sky while most others have to be worked towards and aren't half as good? Serendipity, I guess. And apt observation hearing some Dylan in there. I'm a huge fan and he's influenced me a lot. : )
Woods Avatar
July 22, 2025 at 5:58 AM
Love the guitar playing! Very talented and catchy! Are you playing and singing? I love the authentic quality of this verses an AI melody and voice. Congratulations! Xo
DuBois Avatar
July 22, 2025 at 7:23 PM
Thank you, Crystol! Yes, that's me playing and singing. I'm happy that this sounds nothing like AI. The words came from the heart and how I was feeling at the time, so I'm glad the authenticity comes across.
Jones Avatar
July 22, 2025 at 4:37 AM
Infectious toe tapping tune! Congratulations on your win Daniel!
DuBois Avatar
July 22, 2025 at 7:21 PM
I really appreciate that, Karen. Thank you. If ya can get the toes-a-tappin, that's half the battle. : )
Anderson Avatar
July 21, 2025 at 6:26 PM
Congratulations for your placement in my 'make a song contest'. A fantastic song - very well done! I hope you will be inspired to add music and songs to more of your poems. Lets get more music here!!
DuBois Avatar
July 22, 2025 at 7:20 PM
I greatly appreciate the encouragement, John, and the opportunity to share my music and words with fellow artists. It means so much. Thank you again.
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