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Lady and Hips

There was a young LADY called Brook
She knew every trick in the book
She pouted her lips
And wriggled her HIPS
Then asked you to pay for a look.

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/3/2020 1:33:00 PM

I keep clicking on poems and can't find one yet I have not commented to. I see I already saw this one before too. Again, it's really a good one!!

Paul Callus
Date: 12/3/2020 3:39:00 PM

Pls don't go to too much trouble, Andrea:) Thank you for trying :) It's the intention that counts! Regards // paul

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 6/30/2015 8:11:00 PM

to pay for the cook? - how's your Smokey doing? Mine's not used to his new girl friend yet. Light & Love

Paul Callus
Date: 7/2/2015 1:57:00 AM

Hi Debbie! 'to pay for a cook' would be a witty alternative! Smokey is feeling the summer heat, looking for shady spots and leading an idle lazy life; putting ice cubes in his water, as a treat:) All the best....paul

James Fraser

Date: 6/19/2015 1:17:00 PM

Many a Brook in history has lived your Limerick Paul, and I dare say many in the future will also. So love the flood of Limericks on the Soup these past two years. Wishing you and yours a lovely weekend, James :)

Paul Callus
Date: 6/19/2015 2:58:00 PM

Thank you for reading and liking, James. I think that Limericks are useful in giving 'serious' poetry a break. A lovely weekend to you and all those close to your heart:) // paul

Funom Makama

Date: 6/4/2015 10:10:00 AM

What a marvelous read from a blessed paged built on lines constructed with the lyrics of the skies and words well supported by dynamic foamy clouds. Message well expressed! No doubt an absolute 7##.

Paul Callus
Date: 6/4/2015 12:29:00 PM

Thank you Funom. These comments of yours are very poetic! The high rating is appreciated. // paul

Ivor Davies

Date: 5/27/2015 9:13:00 AM

Paul, it's lucky you pronounce 'book' as boook and not as I pronounce it 'buk'! Nice write, if i'd of written it I would probable be thrown of Poetry Soup.....Ivor

Paul Callus
Date: 5/27/2015 4:32:00 PM

Thank you for stopping by, Ivor. I heard that they've run out of bouncers on Soup:) // paul

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 5/25/2015 9:16:00 AM

mmmmmmmmmn clever! ~olive eloisa :)!

Paul Callus
Date: 5/25/2015 11:17:00 AM

Hi Olive_eloi! By coincidence I have just sent you post and mentioned the limericks!! Your long mmmmmmmm tells me that you are still savouring this one:) Thank you for the 'like'. Hugs // paul

Viv Wigley

Date: 5/23/2015 11:38:00 PM

I'm not putting my hand in my wallet until I've been for my eye test. Fun write, Paul, and good luck in the comp. Regards, Viv

Paul Callus
Date: 5/24/2015 6:45:00 AM

That's wise reasoning, Viv:) Thank you for stopping by. All the best. // paul

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 5/23/2015 6:32:00 PM

: ) haha, a good one.

Paul Callus
Date: 5/24/2015 6:49:00 AM

Glad you enjoyed it, Charm! Txs for reading. [Passed through your village this morning.] // paul

Mama Bear

Date: 5/23/2015 9:31:00 AM

Ah, now the question is did you pay? Clever. Blessings Edith

Paul Callus
Date: 5/23/2015 9:48:00 AM

Thank you for reading, Mama Bear. I have better things to spend my money on, but I am sure that many are willing to oblige! God bless and have a nice weekend. // paul

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/22/2015 4:58:00 PM

this is just CUTE!!

Paul Callus
Date: 5/22/2015 5:34:00 PM

Cute is a cute word! Thank you, Andrea:) Have a lovely weekend. // paul