Paul Callus Poet Limerick

Lady and Hips

There was a young LADY called Brook
She knew every trick in the book
She pouted her lips
And wriggled her HIPS
Then asked you to pay for a look.

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Contest: L&H Limericks
Sponsor: Catie Lindsey

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Andrea Dietrich December 3, 2020 at 1:33 PM I keep clicking on poems and can't find one yet I have not commented to. I see I already saw this one before too. Again, it's really a good one!! Paul Callus December 3, 2020 at 3:39 PM Pls don't go to too much trouble, Andrea:) Thank you for trying :) It's the intention that counts! Regards // paul

Debbie Guzzi June 30, 2015 at 8:11 PM to pay for the cook? - how's your Smokey doing? Mine's not used to his new girl friend yet. Light & Love Paul Callus July 2, 2015 at 1:57 AM Hi Debbie! 'to pay for a cook' would be a witty alternative! Smokey is feeling the summer heat, looking for shady spots and leading an idle lazy life; putting ice cubes in his water, as a treat:) All the best....paul

James Fraser June 19, 2015 at 1:17 PM Many a Brook in history has lived your Limerick Paul, and I dare say many in the future will also. So love the flood of Limericks on the Soup these past two years. Wishing you and yours a lovely weekend, James :) Paul Callus June 19, 2015 at 2:58 PM Thank you for reading and liking, James. I think that Limericks are useful in giving 'serious' poetry a break. A lovely weekend to you and all those close to your heart:) // paul

Funom Makama June 4, 2015 at 10:10 AM What a marvelous read from a blessed paged built on lines constructed with the lyrics of the skies and words well supported by dynamic foamy clouds. Message well expressed! No doubt an absolute 7##. Paul Callus June 4, 2015 at 12:29 PM Thank you Funom. These comments of yours are very poetic! The high rating is appreciated. // paul

Ivor Davies May 27, 2015 at 9:13 AM Paul, it's lucky you pronounce 'book' as boook and not as I pronounce it 'buk'! Nice write, if i'd of written it I would probable be thrown of Poetry Soup.....Ivor Paul Callus May 27, 2015 at 4:32 PM Thank you for stopping by, Ivor. I heard that they've run out of bouncers on Soup:) // paul

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser May 25, 2015 at 9:16 AM mmmmmmmmmn clever! ~olive eloisa :)! Paul Callus May 25, 2015 at 11:17 AM Hi Olive_eloi! By coincidence I have just sent you post and mentioned the limericks!! Your long mmmmmmmm tells me that you are still savouring this one:) Thank you for the 'like'. Hugs // paul

Viv Wigley May 23, 2015 at 11:38 PM I'm not putting my hand in my wallet until I've been for my eye test. Fun write, Paul, and good luck in the comp. Regards, Viv Paul Callus May 24, 2015 at 6:45 AM That's wise reasoning, Viv:) Thank you for stopping by. All the best. // paul

Charmaine Chircop May 23, 2015 at 6:32 PM : ) haha, a good one. Paul Callus May 24, 2015 at 6:49 AM Glad you enjoyed it, Charm! Txs for reading. [Passed through your village this morning.] // paul

Mama Bear May 23, 2015 at 9:31 AM Ah, now the question is did you pay? Clever. Blessings Edith Paul Callus May 23, 2015 at 9:48 AM Thank you for reading, Mama Bear. I have better things to spend my money on, but I am sure that many are willing to oblige! God bless and have a nice weekend. // paul

Andrea Dietrich May 22, 2015 at 4:58 PM this is just CUTE!! Paul Callus May 22, 2015 at 5:34 PM Cute is a cute word! Thank you, Andrea:) Have a lovely weekend. // paul

Cecilia Macfarlane May 22, 2015 at 1:42 PM This one had me laughing Tim. Cute! #7 Hugs Paul Callus May 22, 2015 at 3:41 PM So pleased I managed to make you laugh, Cecilia:) Thank you for stopping by and for the high rating. Have a lovely weekend. Hugs // paul

Kp Nunez May 22, 2015 at 5:51 AM haha...not so nice of her! Good luck, Paul Paul Callus May 22, 2015 at 9:31 AM Thank you Kim! Maybe she'll have a sale soon! // paul

Ilene Bauer May 21, 2015 at 8:00 PM ha! perfect limerick rhythm, paul - well done! Paul Callus May 22, 2015 at 9:17 AM Pleased you enjoyed, Ilene! Thank you! // paul

Nandita Das May 21, 2015 at 2:07 PM LOL. Excellent...7...A great one for the contest. Paul Callus May 21, 2015 at 2:39 PM Glad you enjoyed. Thank you for the 'like' and the 7 rating, Nandita. // paul

Jan Allison May 21, 2015 at 1:38 PM hahahah love it Paul - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs jan xx Paul Callus May 21, 2015 at 1:52 PM Thank you Jan. Glad you enjoyed. Hugs // paul

Tim Smith May 21, 2015 at 1:21 PM lol...good one Paul.....many a man would pay Paul Callus May 21, 2015 at 1:51 PM Thank you, Tim. She needs to earn a living!