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lost
in life’s
complex paths
she hungers for
love
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Contest: Form L ~ Lanterne
Sponsor: Broken Wings
Placed 2nd
© 8th April 2017

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 12/26/2017 9:18:00 PM
A sadly beautiful poem Paul. How tragic to be lost in life, alone - your title is so befitting for the woebegone tone of your amazing and emotional write. Belated congrats too by the way.. :) Warmest wishes my friend.. ~Susan
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Date: 12/27/2017 11:00:00 AM
Thank you, Susan; these insightful comments are very much appreciated, so are the congrats. ~ Warm regards, my friend:) // paul
Date: 4/20/2017 6:31:00 AM
Congratulations on a well deserved win Paul. A 7+
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Date: 4/20/2017 10:16:00 AM
Thank you, Maria. Have a lovely day! Regards // paul
Date: 4/15/2017 4:44:00 AM
Lovely write, Paul. Bonus points for the film reference!! Congrats on your high-placed win!
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Date: 4/15/2017 7:42:00 AM
Thank you, John. To be honest it was only after naming the poem Labyrinth of Solitude that I realized it was also the name of a film!! Regards // paul
Date: 4/12/2017 7:16:00 PM
Congrats on a fine win Paul
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Date: 4/14/2017 3:47:00 AM
Thank you, Joseph. Best regards // paul
Date: 4/12/2017 1:22:00 PM
Paul congratulations on your win in my contest with this wonderful Lanterne. I found it very emotional.
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Date: 4/14/2017 3:57:00 AM
Once again I thank you, Constance! It's a pleasure to be inspired by your contests, and a bonus to be included in your winners' list. ~ All the best // paul
Date: 4/12/2017 9:41:00 AM
A touching and revealing lantern that reaches out and grabs your heart while at the same time pushes you to think. Good work! Emile
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Date: 4/14/2017 3:42:00 AM
Thank you for your insightful comments, Emile, truly appreciated. Regards // paul
Date: 4/11/2017 9:44:00 PM
Wow... This is so beautiful... One of the best lanterns here... Loved the flow... Great one Paul.... Reads like a winner... A big 7...
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Date: 4/14/2017 3:34:00 AM
Thank you for your lovely reaction and the faith you show in this poem, Supraja...in fact it is now a winner:) Regards // paul
Date: 4/11/2017 6:59:00 PM
just seeing your message to me here. Yes, the first and last ones should be like synonyms but i don't know if everyone gets that. Anyway people in love are often lost in love!!!
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Date: 4/14/2017 3:17:00 AM
Thank you for coming back with clarifications, Andrea. Enjoy the weekend:) // paul
Date: 4/10/2017 11:33:00 AM
Wow, you have generated strong emotions in just a few words. What a terrific lanterne! Broken Wings is sure to love it. Wishing you success always.
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Date: 4/11/2017 2:37:00 PM
Thank you for a lovely reaction to my Lanterne, Carolyn:) Your support and encouragement are truly appreciated. Hugs // paul
Date: 4/10/2017 6:19:00 AM
Great Lanterne Paul..
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Date: 4/10/2017 11:12:00 AM
Thank you, Joseph. Regards // paul
Date: 4/9/2017 6:21:00 PM
awesome. I am so loving these lanternes!
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Date: 4/10/2017 11:03:00 AM
There are many good Lanterne entries, Andrea. I have a feeling that the first and last words have to be connected, somehow. Regards // paul
Date: 4/9/2017 9:00:00 AM
Beautifully written, Paul:) a 7:) should do well:)
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Date: 4/10/2017 10:50:00 AM
Pleased you liked it, Jo:) Thank you! Regards // paul
Date: 4/9/2017 4:43:00 AM
Magnificent my friend, Paul! A 7!
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Date: 4/10/2017 9:45:00 AM
Thank you, Demi! Best regards // paul
Date: 4/8/2017 10:13:00 PM
Lovely and deep, Paul. Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 4/10/2017 9:37:00 AM
Thank you, Agnes. (~my first comment for the day~) Regards // paul
Date: 4/8/2017 7:46:00 PM
nice one Paul-Light & love
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Date: 4/9/2017 3:39:00 PM
Pleased to have you visiting, Debbie. Warm regards // paul
Date: 4/8/2017 6:26:00 PM
A great metaphor and image, Paul: Good Luck in the challenge. Best, SuZ
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Date: 4/9/2017 3:56:00 PM
Thank you Suzanne. Your entry is very good! Warm regards // paul
Date: 4/8/2017 5:53:00 PM
Sad Paul, yet beautifully written truth that many face .
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Date: 4/9/2017 3:55:00 PM
So true, Heidi. Thank you for reading and liking. Regards // paul
Date: 4/8/2017 5:47:00 PM
very sad and touching, paul...
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Date: 4/9/2017 3:37:00 PM
Such is life for some, Ilene! Thank you for stopping by. Regards // paul
Date: 4/8/2017 4:46:00 PM
such sadness conveyed beautifully in so few words. Lovely writing Paul :-) lynnxx
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Date: 4/8/2017 4:51:00 PM
Thank you, Lynn. Pleased to have you as my first commenting visitor:) Hope you're enjoying the weekend. Regards // paul

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