La Grande Odalisque

The anatomist’s delight, 
	or his dilemma? 
	Yes, she is...

	Odalisque...
	how could she be less than perfect? 
	Surely Ingres didn’t get it wrong 
	when he painted her nude flesh 
	so voluptuous as to be tactile, 
	reclining oh so languid 
	on her left side, 
	alone in this exotic 
	blue velvet draped room, 
	looking directly at me 
	over her right shoulder,
	betraying nothing
	of her inner dialogue.
	She’s aware of my presence; 
	how could it be otherwise? 
	Surely she must feel the heat
	of my rapt voyeur’s stare 
	on her sinuous, sensuous back. 
	
	Which brings me to the issue of anatomy, 
	the facts of her body.
	
	According to anatomists
	who’ve given long hours
	to the study of her bones,
	hidden though they may be,
	she’s spectacularly deformed.
	You see, her head is too small, 
	her neck too long, 
	her arms aren’t the same length
	(the left is shorter than the right), 
	she has five extra lumbar vertebrae 
	that twist her spine 
	into an impossible relationship with her pelvis,
	thereby rotating her lower body 
	so as to enhance her porcelain sexuality.
	
	Speaking strictly for myself in this matter,
	I couldn’t care less about the facts.
	I’m delighted that art trumped science,
	that reality can be elongated, rotated, 
	and manipulated to achieve perfection. 
	
	
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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May 24, 2013 at 1:55 PM
Jack... xool winning poem... PD
Jordan Avatar
May 26, 2013 at 4:50 PM
Thanks a lot, PD... Jack
Jerden Avatar
May 23, 2013 at 8:50 PM
Anatomists apparently have too much time on their hands. A little distortion can improve the aesthetics, just consider Modigliani and El Greco. Nice analytic poem, a style I never considered before, but which I like very much! The poet as an art critic! Congratulations
Jordan Avatar
May 23, 2013 at 10:01 PM
Thanks, and I agree completely with what you've said about distortion, Modigliani and El Greco, not to mention Picasso... Jack
Richards Avatar
May 23, 2013 at 7:38 PM
I love the different twist you gave to the contest.....something unique from the artist's point of view! Nicely done!
Jordan Avatar
May 26, 2013 at 4:55 PM
Thanks, Carrie. I had a good time writing it, which is what it's all about, right?
Lamoureux Avatar
May 19, 2013 at 6:42 AM
I never knew that, what a spectacular write. You had me from start to finish jack.
Jordan Avatar
May 19, 2013 at 9:37 AM
Thanks again, Richard. I take special delight in artistic license. Jack
Hicks Avatar
May 18, 2013 at 12:50 AM
Well you've certainly discouraged me from attempting that contest... this is stunning! Such meticulous detail and amazingly well thought out. Being as I'm not a painter I don't believe I could come up with words like you do... about your deep appreciation for the brush. I believe, for the time being, I'll stick to what I know. One of your best, my friend!
Jordan Avatar
May 18, 2013 at 9:51 AM
Thanks... I'll check out the contests.
Anglesey Avatar
May 17, 2013 at 7:48 PM
WOW. This is more than words can express. Stupendous talent. You are a master of the poetic arts.
Jordan Avatar
May 26, 2013 at 4:57 PM
Thanks, as always, Karen. I really enjoyed writing it... Jack
Kendrick Avatar
May 17, 2013 at 1:10 PM
Interesting work...Sara
Jordan Avatar
May 17, 2013 at 4:27 PM
Thanks, Sara... Jack
De Paz Avatar
May 17, 2013 at 8:40 AM
Beautyful this imperfect odalisque, although perfect for your eyes, Jack. I would like to appreciate either, but your words are enough.
Jordan Avatar
May 17, 2013 at 8:47 AM
Thank you, Mario. I love the concept of "artistic license." Jack
De Paz Avatar
May 17, 2013 at 8:39 AM
Beautyful this imperfect odalisque, although perfect for your eyes, Jack. I would like to appreciate either, but your words are enough.
Jordan Avatar
May 26, 2013 at 4:56 PM
Thanks for the compliment, Mario.
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