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La-La Land

Let's see, where is this mind of mine headed today It can easily veer off course and totally lose its way Sometimes totally unaware At times blankly stare Off to la-la land and can't follow the play

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 3/26/2018 2:18:00 PM

Hello Jack, it is hard to follow anything when you are asleep.Have a nice day my friend. xxxx-ooo.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/26/2018 5:40:00 PM

Yes i do understand this very well. Hugs xxx-oo.

Jack Ellison
Date: 3/26/2018 2:44:00 PM

As we age, afternoon naps are a priority!!! Thanks for your visits dear Darlene! Love, Happy Jack XOXOX

Silent One

Date: 3/26/2018 1:54:00 PM

Guess that comes with old age lol

Jack Ellison
Date: 3/26/2018 2:17:00 PM

Hey! Steady with the "old age" thingy!!! LOL BTW Must thank you again for introducing me to Maria... I owe you big time, my friend!!! Cheers!!!

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 3/26/2018 12:43:00 PM

At least with la la land, admission is free. xomo :)

Jack Ellison
Date: 3/26/2018 12:53:00 PM

GOOD THING... I visit often!!! Hugs and kisses, Happy Jack XOX

Tom Cunningham

Date: 3/26/2018 10:21:00 AM

Happy jack went to la la land /heard the fillies were fine and grand/but when he started to touch / they said no thanks very much/and now they have told him he's banned/

Jack Ellison
Date: 3/26/2018 11:01:00 AM

Never ever happened to me!!! And horses fly... hmm!!!

Maria Williams

Date: 3/26/2018 7:31:00 AM

La-la Land is quite nice at times, blankly stare and don't follow the play, I've done that a few times. Especially at some boring church services...Maria xox

Jack Ellison
Date: 3/26/2018 7:47:00 AM

It's always a total surprise to me what comes out! I enjoy my lims too!!! A strange lad I am! LOL Love you, my dear Maria!!! Happy Jack XOX