Kwe'


Kwe’ explained he’s an elder, teaches the
ways of his people from their hearts – stories
and songs; spiritual rituals link 
us all – we are all connected, beasts too.
Dedicate songs played to our ancestors,
their wisdom and knowledge has been passed on
from generation to generation.
Kwe’ swept arms wide as if embracing all
Nature, “here Spirit resides, we believe.
here for reflection and observation – 
meditate on interconnectedness.”
Kwe’ picked up his flute, resumed playing tunes –
owl and coyote hooted and howled then
other forest creatures added their songs
creating a symphony of diverse
voices in unison – inter connect.

by Carol Fillmore
for Tell His Story contest
sponsored by Constance La France

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 3/29/2011 1:27:00 PM
thankxx Carol for your wonderful comments and lessons learned to finally enjoy the truest luv any woman can find ..my friend.. appreciate seeing your name every day .. a joy to read your work as well luv..
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Date: 3/22/2011 11:21:00 PM
carol. I am glad to see that you won a place with this beautiful poem. It really gets deeply into his story!! You took it to a great place, with all nature being connected by this Kwe! Congratulations.
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Date: 3/22/2011 1:11:00 PM
Congratulations on the sixth place win in the contest of Constance, Carol
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Date: 3/22/2011 12:31:00 PM
Congratulation with this fine interpretation of the picture of the contest, Carol
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Date: 3/22/2011 11:36:00 AM
Always a pleasure to see you at the top ten, Carol. Congratulations on your worthy poem's honored sixth place. Agape, Moses
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Date: 3/22/2011 11:17:00 AM
Congratulations on your super win Carol in Constance's contest " Tell His Story". Love, Carol
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Date: 3/22/2011 9:08:00 AM
Such an outstanding write, Carol. I remember reading this one earlier and the impact it had on me. Congratulations on your win in Constance's contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/22/2011 8:50:00 AM
Wonderful blank verse, Carol. Many congrat's on your WIN. Lainie
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Date: 3/22/2011 12:14:00 AM
Good to see a winning spot for this write Corol.
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Date: 3/21/2011 8:28:00 PM
Very interesting recital of the Indians' sacred beliefs. Beautiful. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 3/21/2011 8:24:00 PM
Congrats Carol on your wonderful win in Tell His Story luv.. with this stunning story so beautiful..enjoy your top ten sweet success with luv..
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Date: 3/16/2011 11:03:00 AM
I am stopping by today to say a special Thank You for your kind comments Carol. Have a wonderful day. The best to you in Constance's contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/15/2011 6:04:00 PM
Thank you for supporting my contest, Carol, I really like what you did with the inspiration image~~
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Date: 3/15/2011 5:19:00 PM
Carol, I really like the way Kwe' has the power to bring harmonious music throughout the land with the animals joining in the chorus. Quite a unique take on the picture. Wouldn't it be nice if mankind could create "a symphony of diverse voices in unison" and find our way toward peace. Best wishes in the contest! This has to be a winner. Love, Caroln
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