Knot Not So Tight

Men ask women the knot to tie not to choke Countless marriages now revoked

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M. L. Kiser

Date: 2/8/2022 12:58:00 PM

In my experience, no man likes a knot...really, I don't think I would either.

Valsa George

Date: 2/6/2022 8:57:00 PM

Yes, many young men and women these days feel the knot very tight.... So they prolong it or remain without getting knotted. This is so clever... ! Brevity- thy name is Gershon

Gershon Wolf
Date: 2/6/2022 9:03:00 PM

Valsa, you are hired. I've been looking for a good PR firm for quite a while. Please have your people send my people your fee schedule asap. Eagerly awaiting... Thanks!! ~ Gershon

Anselmo Boles

Date: 2/6/2022 7:28:00 PM

I don't think the women have been intently listening to men's pleas, if at all! I need a good lawyer!...ab

Gershon Wolf
Date: 2/6/2022 9:04:00 PM

Oh, but women are 'such good listeners.' ~ Bah, humbug... lol. We just continue to hang in there, anyway... Thanks, Anselmo.

Caycay Jennings

Date: 2/6/2022 5:51:00 PM

A little gem delivered Gershon style. This one has me pondering so you got me - I only ponder when caught be words that are deep yet they aren't. I've been gone because I was not here. All is well - no worries (in case you wondered) ... CayCay

Gershon Wolf
Date: 2/6/2022 7:38:00 PM

CayCay, it is wonderful to see your avatar pop up on my screen. So happy that all is well. And thank you so much for visiting my site and leaving such a profound comment. (Soup mail, please). Life and Light, Gershon

Robert Gorelick

Date: 2/6/2022 1:38:00 PM

No one likes to be on a leash--Kapish! Clever

Gershon Wolf
Date: 2/6/2022 7:53:00 PM

Ha, ha! Love your comment, Robert. Clever as ever. Cheers, Gershon

L Milton Hankins

Date: 2/6/2022 8:55:00 AM

Yes, sometimes they are dissolved over the silliest things. Interesting observation, gw.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 2/6/2022 10:45:00 AM

Yes, it's often over insisting that the knot be tied tightly in every possible area of interaction and intersection. Everyone -- everyone -- needs some breathing room. Thanks, Milt