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You have fought with all your might Its time to let go of your earthly fight The angel’s are waiting at heaven’s door To welcome my father who I adore Time is running out, it makes me sad Soon I will lose my lovely dad I LOVE YOU Jan xxxxxxxx 9th February 2015

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Julia Ward

Date: 2/21/2015 5:32:00 AM

That's a poem to touch all our hearts. Hugs, Alicia, xxx

Jan Allison
Date: 2/21/2015 7:44:00 AM

the poem means the world to me:-( Hugs Jan xx

William Gray

Date: 2/20/2015 5:34:00 AM

Just a thought Jan, check out the Bob Dylan song, 'Tryin to Get to Heaven', its from his 'TIME OUT OF MIND' album. Dad might like it.

Jan Allison
Date: 2/20/2015 8:17:00 AM

Thank you William that is a wonderful thought:-) Hugs Jan xx

James Fraser

Date: 2/20/2015 5:30:00 AM

My thoughts are with your father, his lovely daughter and family, many hugs girl, James xx

Jan Allison
Date: 2/20/2015 8:16:00 AM

Thanks James so lovely to see you back have missed you:-) Hugs Jan xxx

William Gray

Date: 2/20/2015 4:01:00 AM

Love to you and Dad.

Jan Allison
Date: 2/20/2015 4:06:00 AM

Thanks William - I can't see him today I am sneezy and he cannot be exposed to any hint of infection:-( Hugs Jan xx

William Gray

Date: 2/20/2015 3:53:00 AM

Lovely piece Jan. Hugs & xxx!

Jan Allison
Date: 2/20/2015 3:57:00 AM

Thanks William:-) It is a very special poem to me - dad is still fighting bless him - his body is weak but his spirit still shines on:-) Hugs Jan xx

Gwen Benita Mason Gibbs

Date: 2/19/2015 9:37:00 AM

Beautiful piem.

Jan Allison
Date: 2/19/2015 9:39:00 AM

Thanks Gwen - I have only been writing a year and it is helping me through the most traumatic period of my life:-) Hugs jan xx

David Waldrop

Date: 2/17/2015 6:31:00 PM

I read this and when I read the final words "I love you." a Tear fell from one of my eyes I am sorry for your loss, But at this moment I would not be surprised that Your Dad is sitting in heaven watching over you with a single piece of paper in his pocket that has a poem written Feb.9 2015 and the title is Knocking on heaven's door.

Jan Allison
Date: 2/17/2015 6:39:00 PM

Hi David. Dad is surprising us all - he went into hospice on 3rd February and we thought he was ready to say goodbye - but he is amazing us all and is still with us bless him - he is not ready to say goodbye to us all just yet:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Davina Browne

Date: 2/14/2015 6:33:00 AM

aww simply heart breaking with only a couple of words had tears in my eyes

Jan Allison
Date: 2/14/2015 6:39:00 AM

My father is in hospice Davina - he will never come home:-( Hugs jan xx

Mama Bear

Date: 2/11/2015 8:17:00 PM

Fantastic tribute to your well loved father May he be welcomed in heaven with open arms. Hugs Edith

Jan Allison
Date: 2/12/2015 3:56:00 PM

It won't be long before he gets there Mama bear:-( Hugs jan xxx

Arlene Smith

Date: 2/10/2015 3:51:00 PM

Jan, this is so lovely and touching, dear friend.. I pray a comfort for you both... Hugs.. Arlene

Jan Allison
Date: 2/10/2015 4:04:00 PM

I have good days and bad Arlene but it is only to be expected - he didn't think he would be here at Christmas so every day is a bonus - he is in no pain which is a blessing:-) Hugs jan xxx

Honestly J.T.

Date: 2/9/2015 12:38:00 PM

Sad story, Great poem -JT

Jan Allison
Date: 2/9/2015 1:39:00 PM

Thanks for dropping by to comment J T:-) Hugs Jan xx

Sandra Haight

Date: 2/9/2015 12:31:00 PM

Prayers and hugs, Jan...I know what this is like...today, February 9, my dad is gone 30 years...hugs and love...Sandra

Jan Allison
Date: 2/9/2015 1:39:00 PM

Aww Sandra i guess it is one of those things that is always with you:-( hugs Hugs Jan xx

Paul Callus

Date: 2/9/2015 10:34:00 AM

I am touched Jan! Read your bottom comment...didn't realize he was back in hospice; it's true...it's as if permission is sometimes being asked for. You write this with love and resignation. In our prayers. hugs // paul

Jan Allison
Date: 2/9/2015 10:49:00 AM

He was due to go in for respite for a week - coming out tomorrow but the decision is made for him to stay - I am very happy with this - he is in the most wonderful place and he wants to end his days there:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/9/2015 8:01:00 AM

I feel your pain at the moment of writing this one..It is very hard to see our parents suffer..Get rest when you can, take care of yourself and don't get down..Thanks for the visit..Sara

Jan Allison
Date: 2/9/2015 10:03:00 AM

I am at peace with what is happening Sara am just so blessed I discovered writing to help me through the hardest period of my life - wow what a journey i have been on in just a year! Hugs jan xx

Casarah Nance

Date: 2/9/2015 7:26:00 AM

HUGSxxx

Jan Allison
Date: 2/9/2015 10:01:00 AM

Oh Boy I need them - thanks Cas :-) :-):-) Hugs jan xx

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 2/9/2015 5:51:00 AM

The magnitude of our suffering is proportional to the love shared! May God welcome him into his arms when ready and may you find the courage to withstand the blow! Celestial poem and a seven, dear Jan!

Jan Allison
Date: 2/9/2015 10:00:00 AM

Thanks Demetrios I appreciate your kind words:-) Hugs Jan xx

Vera Duggan

Date: 2/9/2015 4:52:00 AM

Jan this is a wonderful tribute to your dad, I know you have been going through hell just lately and believe me I do know what you are going through, so as Peter said keep your chin up and remember the good times, your father will always be in your heart, take care my dear friend and give him a big kiss from me.............Vera........

Jan Allison
Date: 2/9/2015 9:59:00 AM

He has deteriorated so much Vera - he was due to go home 10th Feb but today they have made the decision he can stay - I may print this out for him or at least tell him - maybe he just needs to know it is ok to let go now:-) hugs jan xx

Shane Cooper

Date: 2/9/2015 2:11:00 AM

It is a loving tribute to your dad Jan, he knows you love him and he loves you. That is what is most important and it is what you will always hold in your heart. The grief will pass the love will not. Stay strong my dear friend. All my love and support, Shane xxx

Jan Allison
Date: 2/9/2015 3:24:00 AM

Thanks Shane I do appreciate your care and support:-) Hugs jan xx

Jean Omalley Polatnick

Date: 2/8/2015 10:56:00 PM

I'm glad you have the support of Hospice during this difficult time. Be strong, sweet Jan. Love surrounds you both.

Jan Allison
Date: 2/9/2015 3:21:00 AM

Hospice - oh what words can you use to describe hospice and the angels who work there - truly amazing place - they look after dad but also are there for the family too - I can't thank them enough for all they do:-) Hugs jan xx

Tim Smith

Date: 2/8/2015 9:48:00 PM

Stay strong, let the tears flow and remember all the good times..listen closely to the stories of him from others....he will always be in your heart Jan.....hugs Tim

Jan Allison
Date: 2/9/2015 3:19:00 AM

I am strong at the moment Tim - toughest time was the other week when mum was in hospital and dad at home and I was totally exhausted - that almost broke me but I have my family, friends and poetry to help me cope through the dark days I know will come soon:-) Hugs jan xx

Ilene Bauer

Date: 2/8/2015 8:42:00 PM

very touching, jan! you fooled me on the poem about your dog but i see from the comments that this one is for real. i'm sorry to hear about your dad's condition but you've written a beautiful poem for him here...

Jan Allison
Date: 2/9/2015 2:28:00 AM

Yes this is real Ilene - he was diagnosed terminal cancer in June - he is a fighter but now he needs to let go - the main thing is despite cancer in 2 places he is in no physical pain at all:-) Hugs jan xx

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 2/8/2015 8:40:00 PM

What a beautiful Valentine to give to your Dad Jan. Blessings, Connie

Jan Allison
Date: 2/9/2015 2:27:00 AM

That is a lovely idea Connie:-) Hugs Jan xx

Robert Lindley

Date: 2/8/2015 8:23:00 PM

So sorry my friend. I know what that's like myself. I was 15 when my Dad died after along battle with cancer. This is a beautiful tribute write. We love them, we lose them but comes a time when we can yet again join them. A7

Jan Allison
Date: 2/8/2015 8:26:00 PM

He is in hospice hanging on Robert - breaks my heart to see him but I must be there for him:-( Hugs jan xx

Janet Eaton

Date: 2/8/2015 8:10:00 PM

This is so beautifully written. Tears brimmed my eyes. Love and hugs to you. Janet

Jan Allison
Date: 2/8/2015 8:15:00 PM

My Dad is in hospice Janet and sadly it is only a matter of time. Heartbreaking as it is, I just want him to have my permission to simply let go:-( hugs Jan xxx