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Knock On the Door

Was a monster knocking at the door, To find out I crept across the floor, There again was the pattering sound, To protect this house I had to stand my ground. I grabbed my bright pink base ball bat, Which would make this monster quickly scat, More and more spattering sounds had come, Where was this evil monster even from? I decided waiting for it to leave would take awhile, So I opened the door, expecting a crocodile, But all I saw was rain, pouring down strong, I was so scary, because now the monster was long gone. Every night that there's a lot of rain coming from the sky, The monster knocks on the door to say hi. But whenever I peek at him through the window, He is already gone, i'm just to slow. I wonder if the monster will ever knock and come in, With a jolly and cheering grin, But its still never happened before, So for now he is just the knock on the door.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 4/24/2016 8:36:00 AM
Nice to read your first poem again, Chloe. linda
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Date: 12/24/2015 2:56:00 AM
Chloe, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 12/24/2015 2:04:00 AM
Chloe, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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