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Knifing Empty Air

Silent cold screaming loneliness is all that can be heard here, It splits the air as a blade that has just left the bastard file, A sky dark grey blankets my cares, warms my cancerous apathy, These days mix into one, a fast brewed blend of monotony played in vain, A record spins ceaselessly on, a musical carousel, a soundtrack for my empty days, Closed in, secluded, I have forgotten once again to be human. My hopes and dreams I have cast aside in this windowless chamber, I grow deaf and blind from the silence that eats at my senses, I cannot feel the hope for tomorrow that led me to this pitfall. Dreams that once burned bright behind my eyes, now lay snoring In a funeral pyre; it ignites, shines bright, what once was is destroyed. Will they resurface from the ashes? Or will the winds simply sweep them away? – Gilbert Attwood Jr.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 3/14/2016 12:53:00 PM
gilbert attwood, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 7/27/2015 1:46:00 PM
Gilbert, I enjoyed reading your poem today. I hope you are well. Forever ~SKAT~
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Date: 9/23/2011 2:31:00 PM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you today Gilbert. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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