Knife Thrower

The tent, has a scent of mildewed fear
and palpitates with shouting cries
exciting our senses with familiar rise
Our nerves stretched taut, with thrills, inside 

The marksman tosses wild and free
A showman's skill that stirs the dust
I signal him, he aims at me...
Then I  must brace, and I must trust! 

It is approaching time for the last shot
I must hold my breath, and stop my heart
Then in rapid fire, he'll throw the lot 
I now give the final cue to start

He hurls the daggers around my head
My death defied by dangerous chance!
He drinks applause so keenly fed

My own reward .... a meager glance....
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For David's Contest: Circus
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Onclaud Avatar
May 20, 2012 at 9:10 AM
riveting, carrie... congrats on your win!..:) huggs!
Guzzi Avatar
May 19, 2012 at 3:59 PM
YUP the target doesn't get much attention GOOD choice. Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
Song Avatar
May 19, 2012 at 2:18 PM
Okay Carrie...just put down the knives and no one will get hurt!! hahaha....this is outstanding with details and movement! I love the part of the target holding his breath and the tent's mildewed sense of fear! Always a blast to read your work! Congrats to the best of the best! Y_O_U! :) Gwendolen
Grisetti Avatar
May 19, 2012 at 10:58 AM
Congrats on your win.
Brown Avatar
May 19, 2012 at 7:48 AM
Congratulations on your placement in David's "Circus" contest Carrie. Love, Carol
O'Leary Avatar
May 19, 2012 at 3:58 AM
Very nic... suspense ... and congrats... Terry
Williams Avatar
May 19, 2012 at 3:26 AM
Carrie, congrats on your win, I loved how you described the circus tent atmosphere then the thrills of the knife ending in your meager recognition..David
Cooper Avatar
May 16, 2012 at 6:48 PM
lol love the last line lol
Horne Avatar
May 11, 2012 at 3:01 PM
love this wonderful write - a sure winner. many congrats on all your wins, my friend
Kendrick Avatar
May 11, 2012 at 2:40 PM
Enjoyed reading your entry to the contest..I know that David's will be pleased with it..Reads like a winner to me..Good luck in the contest...Thanks for the kind review of my work..Sara
Poet Avatar
May 11, 2012 at 8:13 AM
Very good approach to the theme of the contest Carrie.Best wishes to you.
Horsman Avatar
May 11, 2012 at 6:56 AM
like this Carrie, one can feel the stress in every word you write. Oh by the way, i'd give you more than a meager glance, promise. harry
Pettit Avatar
May 10, 2012 at 11:15 PM
I don't want anyone throwing knives at me; no matter how much money they offer me.
Dietrich Avatar
May 10, 2012 at 9:44 PM
I see you gave yourself the easy job though. Well, it's also a STRESSFUL one. VERY well crafted circus performer poem, Carrie.
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