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Kitschy--Dance, Y'All

Clad in a garish green muu-muu, she danced wildly to golden oldies. Dumbfounded grandkids stared. April 1, 2017

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Date: 4/7/2017 12:44:00 PM
You present such a striking picture, Janice! I hope it was caught on video:) This is a superb Kimo. Congratulations on such a fine win. Regards // paul
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 4/7/2017 2:31:00 PM
Thanks so much, Paul! The kids were too stunned to make a video! Janice
Date: 4/7/2017 8:51:00 AM
Janice CONGRATULATIONS on your win in my contest with this Kimo. Well done.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 4/7/2017 10:01:00 AM
Constance, thank YOU--for sponsoring, placing my poem, and this nice comment! Janice
Date: 4/7/2017 8:45:00 AM
Congrats on your win Janice
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 4/7/2017 10:02:00 AM
Thanks so much, Joseph! Janice
Date: 4/7/2017 7:48:00 AM
Splendid piece!! Congrats Janice, for your placement with this lovely piece!! ;-)
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 4/7/2017 10:03:00 AM
Thanks so much, Teddy! Janice
Date: 4/6/2017 10:03:00 PM
I adored this one, Janice. Glad to see it again while perusing the winner list! SEVEN
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 4/6/2017 10:10:00 PM
Thank you so much, Andrea! Janice
Date: 4/2/2017 8:43:00 PM
this is just awesome. She sounds like me!!! Love it,
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 4/2/2017 11:41:00 PM
Thanks so much, Andrea. Glad you like it! Janice
Date: 4/1/2017 6:44:00 PM
Kids don't think a grandma could have ever been young - they're funny little critters.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 4/1/2017 8:23:00 PM
Yes, they are! Thanks for the comment, Sunlite! Janice
Date: 4/1/2017 5:47:00 PM
Glad she/you danced Janice, and thanks for creating memories the grandkids will fully appreciate soon. Anil Deo
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 4/1/2017 8:24:00 PM
Thanks so much, Anil! Janice

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