Kite Flying

the young boy running
his kite lifts into the sky
delighted laughter
his dreams no longer earthbound
oh, the possibilities


4/2/15
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Martin Avatar
April 18, 2015 at 12:44 PM
Hmm, Interesting and memorable.
Callus Avatar
April 5, 2015 at 6:45 AM
Top marks for this Tanka, Barbara. The kite lifts, so do the boy's dreams! A happy atmosphere...the boy's laughter is witness to it. Take care. // paul
Wigley Avatar
April 4, 2015 at 2:25 AM
er, keyboard playing up.....
Wigley Avatar
April 4, 2015 at 2:24 AM
Sorry about the typo, Barbara. ??q? uo p??oq??? ? ?nq i ??i? ?s?? ??? si si??
Wigley Avatar
April 4, 2015 at 2:23 AM
Lovely, gentle innocence. Great work. Good luck., Barabara. Viv x
Kendrick Avatar
April 3, 2015 at 10:26 AM
Ahh!!! I can just see the scene..Sometimes an old woman likes the kites as well..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
Dietrich Avatar
April 2, 2015 at 9:55 PM
love the comparison of the kite to dreams not earthbound any more, barbara. best of luck in the contest.
Allison Avatar
April 2, 2015 at 8:46 PM
beautifully penned Barbara good luck in the contest:-) Hugs jan xx
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