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Kite

A toy kite airborne in flight tethered by a long thread brings much joy to little children waving, fluttering against clear blue sky is better use of paper than printed news Premium contest winner (5) Written 05/July/2021 John Anderson sponsored Ring my bell poetry contest Syllable count PS 1,2,4,6,8,10,8,2,1

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/9/2021 12:46:00 PM

- Your kite flies high ... :) - Congratulations on your win, Krish :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 7/9/2021 11:37:00 PM

Thanks Anne Lise!:)

Jan Allison

Date: 7/9/2021 11:06:00 AM

The paper kite sure brings a lot more joy Krish! many congrats on your win :-) hugs Jan xx

Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 7/9/2021 11:37:00 PM

Thanks Jan! We used to make kites out of newspapers when we were children!!

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 7/9/2021 8:49:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. What a fun/cute write. A kit is more fun than a newspaper. Have fun with your kite and win. Blessings.................

Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 7/9/2021 11:36:00 PM

Thanks Very Much Paula! My good wishes to you!

Eve Roper

Date: 7/8/2021 4:54:00 PM

Very well done, Krish. I feel the emotion and see the children having fun. Congratulations on your win. Eve

Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 7/9/2021 12:35:00 AM

Thanks Eve!! Hope you are well!:)

Wendy Watson

Date: 7/8/2021 12:03:00 PM

Wonderful, Krish. I love the thoughts expressed here and really enjoyed your short message.

Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 7/8/2021 1:34:00 PM

Thanks Wendy! Pleased you like it!:)

Sam Kauffman

Date: 7/8/2021 8:56:00 AM

Very good Krish. Agreed! Congrats and kudos for your win!

Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 7/8/2021 1:33:00 PM

Thanks Sam! Delighted with your visit!

Avery Won

Date: 7/8/2021 4:37:00 AM

Very nice, congrats!

Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 7/8/2021 1:33:00 PM

Thanks Avery!

Beata Agustin

Date: 7/8/2021 1:40:00 AM

Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this, making me smile... God bless you.

Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 7/8/2021 1:56:00 AM

Thanks Beata! Lovely to have you visit my page!

Christuraj Alex

Date: 7/7/2021 9:01:00 PM

Beautifully Written. Congratulations!

Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 7/8/2021 12:08:00 AM

Thanks Christuraj! Cheers my friend!

Supraja Kannan

Date: 7/6/2021 11:30:00 PM

That's a clever climax... Such a brilliant theme for the contest... Reads like a winner...

Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 7/6/2021 11:43:00 PM

Thanks Supraja! Kites were one of my big passions during school days!

Rama Balasubramanian

Date: 7/6/2021 3:53:00 AM

What an ending! I agree with you. Has been ages since I last read newspaper. All the best for contest

Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 7/6/2021 9:34:00 AM

Thanks Rama! Used to read the Hindu when I was in India! But newspapers are owned by political parties! no truth in them!

L Milton Hankins

Date: 7/5/2021 12:23:00 PM

Krish, you certainly make an excellent point in this one! I agree!

Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 7/5/2021 1:01:00 PM

Thanks Milton!! Three cheers to you!!