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Kiss twice - TB

My girl's so nice sugar, spice, cream kiss twice ~ sweet dream _______________________ November 06, 2023 Something Bauk-tiful Contest Sponsor: Charles Messina

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Date: 11/17/2023 8:23:00 PM
Congratulations!
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Date: 11/17/2023 4:54:00 AM
I love this one, Gershon. Brings back memories of tucking in my little ones. Really nice write, my friend. Congratulations on your win! ~Kissesonthecheeks
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Date: 11/12/2023 12:12:00 AM
Sweet poem BB….Debx
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Date: 11/8/2023 5:48:00 AM
When this contest was set I had no idea what a Than-Bauk was. Now that I’m a little better educated I sense a podium placement for you GW. All the best in Charles’ contest. Terry
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Date: 11/8/2023 11:09:00 AM
Nice of you to think highly of this one, Terry. Appreciated. :) gw
Date: 11/7/2023 1:35:00 PM
you did this form beautifully!
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/8/2023 11:10:00 AM
Aw, thank you so much, Andrea... I was lucky: The words just seemed to fall into my lap. Here's to sweetness! :) gw
Date: 11/7/2023 11:14:00 AM
Ooh sweet indeed…
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/8/2023 11:32:00 AM
My sweet tooth is never satisfied. ~ Cookie Monster
Date: 11/7/2023 8:27:00 AM
"Sweet" poetry, gw. I like a little light poetry when I can find it. Have a great week, my friend. BB
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/8/2023 11:35:00 AM
Call this one 'Poetry-Lite,' I guess. Thanks, Bill!
Date: 11/7/2023 12:52:00 AM
I am intrigued by this form and quite ignorant but your skillful word choice is not lost on me. Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 11/8/2023 11:37:00 AM
A Saying (that should be found somewhere): "Who is NOT 'ignorant?' -- She who knows what she does not know. ... That's you, Karen!! Thanks, gw

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