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For the spellbinding prompts and contest 'The Logic of Longing' by Ink Empress ~ 

thank you so much for reading, sending everyone love and light 

 

kiss of the serpent

unspoken ~
the siren of sour-ice sunsets 
hangs on the cusp of kismet ~
tied with swarovski threads 
of viper-thorns and 
sinful solstice seasons ,
I, the mistress of the snake, 
slither with the minstrel ,
laying the cobra crown 
of ash feathers ~
on your elysian epitaph 
where the solaris weeps 
and esoteric emeralds sigh …

O blush opal love …
 you were my Ouroboros ~
in the skin of seven-scaled saint,
the snake biting its tale 
forming forever sparks 
of flaming rose rings ~
as eternity emanated healing 
on sapphire heart-fire,
surfing on the crest of the sea
with coconut-scented kayaks 
that reach beyond 
the endlessness of the earth ,
and there was still 
a lore of life lulled 
by devil-oysters
 and ocean-dragons  
until death fed
upon what never felt alive …
I reminisce the mists 
of medieval romance ~ 
rippling in your rage 
as remorse remained weary 
and the clouds 
spilled a thousand secrets 
soaked with teal and topaz,
this moon-water 
became a venom song,
shean and slippery ~
with sarcastic notes 
bleeding in velvet,
and the fangs of the fortnight 
remained fatal 
with their fever of fixation …

but … maybe 
our longing  is a myth 
a reincarnated taboo,
flowing in psychedelic papers ~
like a tributary aching to meet 
the soul of silver ink ~
because a torn canvas
is two paintings 
consumed into one …
as if, pulses of the lost 
dwell between 
the diamond edges
becoming twin-flame breaths ~ 
and the sun sighs 
defeated by the 
ancestral spirits 
hanging low 
within the smudge
of liquid sins 
in the sky drenched 
with smokey blood 
of the dusk and the dawn …

in this pathological  
heist of premordial passion ~
let the kiss of the serpent 
exhume me …
let the python primroses 
dress the infancy 
of affection that could 
not come true …
because, 
I'm seduced by the stars 
without a script ,
love-drunk on desire 
as you melt my tears 
into your sweet fire ~
where I blemish …
within wrinkled ache 
betrayed … and buried 
beneath the pearls you left for me …
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Goldsmith Avatar
August 29, 2026 at 1:06 PM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderfully written "kiss of the serpent"  write. Great Pictures... They are still finding new things in the deep waters. Have a blessed weekend with your wonderful win...............
Empress Avatar
August 28, 2026 at 7:08 AM
Fave ofcourse Sending you light always 💫 🌙
Empress Avatar
August 28, 2026 at 7:07 AM
The longing is palpable, so achingly poetic, so very touching, soulfully moving, and I cant help but quote “ but … maybe our longing is a myth a reincarnated taboo, flowing in psychedelic papers ~ like a tributary aching to meet the soul of silver ink ~” for some reason I felt the sadness too as I read those words! Sigh! Sometimes, all we are left with is “ maybe” 😳 Youv nailed it like always! You know how to impress my heart Pleasure reading Congratulations on your first place win 🏆
Empress Avatar
August 28, 2026 at 7:05 AM
You write dark so well dear Hiya, so many beautiful metaphors and word pairings, that many would be in awe of! And I absolutely love also the pictures youv used here! They are gorgeous! And I absolutely love the flow of your lines! And how it resonates! And how it is my kinda poetic language! I felt like I was reading me through your ink! I love especially “ cobra crown” and so many more lines in this especially ending! Theres so many emotions! And how youv used the prompts are clever!
George Avatar
August 12, 2026 at 1:10 AM
"....a torn canvas is two paintings consumed into one … as if, pulses of the lost dwell between the diamond edges becoming twin-flame breaths ~" Once you saw love as Ouroboros, but the stream of love got poisoned and it became a seething memory. Your images are so dreamy, slithering like a serpent and coiling all around us. The sense of longing with 'love drunk on desire' is so intense, so is the pain of loss. But pearls of memory are left behind. The snake imagery is compelling! I can only exclaim- Wow !
Dietrich Avatar
August 6, 2026 at 7:13 PM
You used the contest prompts really cleverly how you worked them into this poem. Your imagery is always off the charts. I love the reference to mythology, particularly the siren and beautiful pictures you showed. Awesome, Hiya🌹
Kendrick Avatar
August 6, 2026 at 5:21 PM
Interesting work you have penned in this contest entry, Hiya. It reads like a creative contender to me. Way to go. Thank you for sharing your creativness with us. Sara K. ⭐
DiMino Avatar
August 6, 2026 at 12:56 PM
"and there was still a lore of life lulled by devil-oysters and ocean-dragons until death fed upon what never felt alive …" -- Wow, thrilling imagery! "this moon-water became a venom song, shean and slippery ~ " Provocative, alluring. "love-drunk on desire as you melt my tears into your sweet fire ~ where I blemish … within wrinkled ache betrayed … and buried beneath the pearls you left for me …" -- I think even good angels are love-drunk on desire. Elixir of poetry!
Kauffman Avatar
August 6, 2026 at 12:28 PM
Dear Hiya, once again I am lost in a rapture of your passionate, and elegant, words, powerful images and "seduced" by the way you pair words creating a dreamlike sequence of flowing pictures and romantic emotions. - grief like a serpent! In the end what you have left are pearls to remind you of this romance. Wonderfully written, my friend. Your poem pulls me into this realm to savor each line. Best wishes for the contest! Sending pearls of blessings and joy!
Andresen Avatar
August 6, 2026 at 11:27 AM
- Dear Hiya... how beautiful... I'm just sitting here reading it over and over... savoring it on every inhale and exhale ... - hugs
May Avatar
August 6, 2026 at 9:27 AM
"maybe our longing is a myth a reincarnated taboo, flowing in psychedelic papers ~ like a tributary aching to meet the soul of silver ink", Very nicely penned Hiya
Parker Avatar
August 6, 2026 at 8:34 AM
drawn into the realm and vison of longing that the passionate find intoxicating is a world of emotional danger
Poet Avatar
August 6, 2026 at 8:28 AM
Such an amazing poem, dear Hiya, is a vivid and intricate tapestry of imagery and emotion, weaving together themes of love, longing, and transformation. The evocative use of metaphors and rich symbolism creates a dream-like environment that invites deep reflection. However, the complexity of your diction may require multiple readings sometimes to fully grasp its wonderful imagery layers, adding to its mystical allure but also challenging immediate comprehension. Best for a great win.
Lane Avatar
August 6, 2026 at 6:05 AM
Ocean dragons and sea serpents wearing Swarovski jewels. Now, that's a temptation to be aware of, so I think I'll pass on being kissed by the scaly ones. I'm more of a... "I'm seduced by the stars without a script, love-drunk on desire" kinda woman. Your vocabulary and intense emotional portrayal are evident in your verses. Hiya. Another fine poetic write. Fantastic photos to accompany your entry!
Buhagiar Avatar
August 6, 2026 at 5:46 AM
A psychedelic vision written in a seamless manner. I wonder who seduced you most: you or the stars. Clever inserts of prompts. Certainly, this will result in the best placement. ⭐⭐⭐
Gibbons Avatar
August 6, 2026 at 4:59 AM
Wow my dear hiya I loved reading your breathtaking write ✍️hugz ZZZ my friend ❤️‍🩹🦄🦋🧜‍♀️🌈😘
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